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Name: Alinda Putri Dewanti
Joined: Jan 8, 2017		 Last Post: Jan 26, 2017
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School: SMAN 1 Pandaan

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Alindaputri   
Jan 26, 2017
Undergraduate / Applying in Turkish Universities, expectation from studying in Turkey and express the future plans [2]

Hello, I'm planning to apply Turkish scholarship and got this prompt
Please explain your expectation from studying in Turkey and express your future plans (1000 characters)

I had written the answer. Would you mind editing it? Thank you ^_^

Turkey means new opportunities



Studying in Turkey would give me the opportunity to learn in a better educational environment. Because, the knowledge comes from anywhere. This is in line with the geographical location of Turkey which is located on two continents, Asia and Europe. The multicultural environment will give me many different types of colleagues and will build me to be a person with a lot of tolerance and who is more sociable. Moreover, journalism requires not only extensive knowledge but also the ability to speak a foreign language. Therefore, I can improve my linguistic skills by learning to speak Turkish and it will be very helpful for me.

After I graduate, I'm not just going to be a journalist; I'll also build a publishing house; I'll build a reading public park in Indonesia, and everyday there will be beneficial activities such as story writing training, training to be a young reporter and journalist in Turkey, and other useful social activities. In addition, I'll also teach Indonesian and local languages, especially Java to the Turkish people so they will be more confident in communicating with Indonesian people when they travel to Indonesia someday.
Alindaputri   
Jan 13, 2017
Undergraduate / Exchanging ideas and sharing experiences. Applying in scholarship, Essay about my interests. [12]

@Holt
I had revised the answer. Would you mind read and editing it?

When I was nine years old, I started trying to make the fiction story themed friendship. Although with many times of the editing proccess, eventually my first short story was published in the bulletin writing club that I followed, which named 'Kelab Penulis Cilik'. That was beginning I loved the world of literacy until now. And now, I have published various works such as 3 children's book entitled 'Cooking Show', 'Jeanie Vs Trio Usil', and 'My spooky moment'; articles, and various short stories that have been published in various print and media online in Indonesia.

At school I also follow extracurricular which named 'Kharisma'. It is journalism extracurricular on my school which always publishes school magazine every three months. Due to the works that I have published, in the first year of high school I've been trusted to become the third editor and coordinator reporter for tenth grade. Until next year, I didn't become chief of editor but I believed to be the first editor, vice chief of editor, and also coordinator reporter for all grade. Because the tasks what i passed is bigger than chief of editor and the school believed me that I could carry out more than what the chief did.

Being member of Forum Pelajar Indonesia Ke-8 which organized by the NGO named Indonesia Student Youth Forum in August 2016 makes me doing any social activities. Such as charity program called 'Sejuta Koin untuk Pelajar' for the construction of schools in remote areas, Social project named 'Baku Tembak' that was giving the worth book to the public reading park in my regency, and giving socialization about the impact of globalization and the role of youth and parents to deal with it.
Alindaputri   
Jan 9, 2017
Undergraduate / Exchanging ideas and sharing experiences. Applying in scholarship, Essay about my interests. [12]

Hello, I'm planning to apply scholarship and got this prompt
Please specify your area of interests, hobbies, and voluntary works

I had written the answer. Would you mind editing it? It's my first time to make scholarship essay and English is not my native so it will be very helpful for me if you correct some grammatical errors and unnecessary words. Thank you ^_^

Philanthropic and communicative



Many peoples interpret that the communication is simply limited to oral. But actually, there are times when the writing becomes the best choice in communication. Meet with new people is fun for me. Exchange ideas and share experiences made me become myself completely. Indeed, communicate with others, especially strangers is not easy for everyone. That is why sometimes I choose to write. By writing, I'm so much more freely to express what is in my mind and wrote it into an article. Happiness in meeting new people make it easy for me to look for ideas in a work, because I think new people is a new idea. Because that's what makes me has published various works such as 3 children's story books, articles, and various short stories that have been published in various print and online media in Indonesia. Participate in journalism extracurricular at school encouraged me to keep working until I believed to be the editor of the school magazine. Not only that, the other greatest happiness in my life is when I can be beneficial for everyone around me. Therefore, I often doing social project such as charity program, giving the worth book to be read to the public reading park, providing information and motivation in the world of literacy, and giving socialization about the impact of globalization and the role of youth and parents to deal with it. Because I think happiness is not about what I get but what I give to my surroundings.
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