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Name: Aravind Balakumar
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aravee   
Feb 2, 2017
Undergraduate / "Youth connectors of future" Program by Swedish Institute. [5]

@Shamsher sing
The line from the second paragraph "Predominantly ... poverty" is quiet wordy. Try to break it into simple and smaller sentence are make sure it is concise. This might ease the flow of the paragraph. The Paragraph even contains Sentence Fragments "When an individual or group of people experience poverty over extended period of time" as well try , instead of full stop to provide the user the continuation of sentences.
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