jaikrishna12
Feb 5, 2017
Writing Feedback / Rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete [2]
TOPIC: Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays evolution of supermarkets and globalization has caused a threat to the domestic business and thus the local society. In my opinion, rapid expansion of supermarkets deter the local business. Alongside that local communities losing their livelihood and occupation due to the increased competition.
It is undoubtedly noticed that, many of them are attracted to the multinational supermarkets due to their exquisite offers, customer service and the quality of products. At the same time customers are benefited to get all the necessary groceries at one location. Especially in a cosmopolitan city like Bangalore, it is difficult to get each and every item from local shops. Hence, most of them depend on supermarkets to save their time. Consequently, communities adopted to purchase from the supermarkets. On the other hand, it has become difficult for the domestic business to compete with the recent developments
Although Globalization has brought a few job opportunities to the society, but it has deprived impact on the existing businesses which are running since ancient periods. For instance, In india weaving profession severely affected and often died in many instances. It is the responsibility of Country and its government to make amendments to their legislation to support the their communities and also expansion of supermarkets have to be restrained to some extent. In addition, merchants have to use the latest technologies and social media to campaign the products and commence selling them through Facebook, watsapp and so forth.
In conclusion, rapid expansion of supermarkets always have a threat to the local business and it has to be restrained from domestic business in order to avoid the future deaths.
TOPIC: Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Threat toward local business
Nowadays evolution of supermarkets and globalization has caused a threat to the domestic business and thus the local society. In my opinion, rapid expansion of supermarkets deter the local business. Alongside that local communities losing their livelihood and occupation due to the increased competition.
It is undoubtedly noticed that, many of them are attracted to the multinational supermarkets due to their exquisite offers, customer service and the quality of products. At the same time customers are benefited to get all the necessary groceries at one location. Especially in a cosmopolitan city like Bangalore, it is difficult to get each and every item from local shops. Hence, most of them depend on supermarkets to save their time. Consequently, communities adopted to purchase from the supermarkets. On the other hand, it has become difficult for the domestic business to compete with the recent developments
Although Globalization has brought a few job opportunities to the society, but it has deprived impact on the existing businesses which are running since ancient periods. For instance, In india weaving profession severely affected and often died in many instances. It is the responsibility of Country and its government to make amendments to their legislation to support the their communities and also expansion of supermarkets have to be restrained to some extent. In addition, merchants have to use the latest technologies and social media to campaign the products and commence selling them through Facebook, watsapp and so forth.
In conclusion, rapid expansion of supermarkets always have a threat to the local business and it has to be restrained from domestic business in order to avoid the future deaths.
