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@Holt
i removed the Irrelevant parts in the paragraph and i compressed it to 3 paragraphs, which focus on the goals no extra stuff. i hope i have made some progress and most and above all thank you for your time.

I was barley 13 when I recognized that I have big dreams when it comes to technologies. I have always had great passion for computers and mobiles. I spent all part of my high school life in front of computers and mobile screens, trying to cause problems so that I can fix them. In the year 2011 I was given a government scholarship to go to university and was accepted at xxx institute of Technology, which is one of the best universities in Ethiopia. My desires to study was continuously high, after going through three years in Electrical Engineering, on my fourth and fifth year I specialized in computer Engineering, which gave me the opportunity to gain a more in depth knowledge of the subject by working on project like development of desktop application for xxx Motors Sales, Patient Information System (PIS) for university clinic and Bar-code reader using webcam for security using Visual Studio programming language. More over the years I spent at the university have thought me how to be a more ethical, hardworking, and independent as well as team oriented person. Furthermore, I have accomplished certificates in maintenance of computer and networking plus Google certified for internet safety, search, Google plus and chrome.

During my internship time in xxx Financial Technology, I worked on two different projects, the first was Customer Care Resolution Tool Design and Implementation, the second was Cutoff service for Ethiopian Electric utility using Java programming language. Living in a country where the use of technology has not developed it was not easy to go in the world and find a job as my only alternative I decided to use my entrepreneur skills to open my own business by using the knowledge acquired throughout the years. The business mainly focus on a one stop service for computer and mobile maintenance, online multiplayer games, WI-Fi service at their home and entertainment zone. The entertainment category includes South Korean TV- Show which give a vivid image of the colorful culture and development. Even though it was one of the most challenging periods of my life I am thankful for it because it has tout me many things and made me mentally stronger as well as help me take care of my family.

South Korea is known for quality education in information and communication. it's considered the best in the world in IT and Robotics on top of that the business in Asia is booming the major factors for this growth are the rapid embrace of technology and engineering by the South Korean government and the strong cultural motivation of the people to relentlessly work hard, there for the employment opportunities in South Korea are wide ranged. Above all its center of origin for technological innovation of SAMSUNG, the world's largest mobile phone maker. The main reason why I want to study in South Korea under the KGSP is because I genuinely feel it will bring my desire of working with the SAMSUNG company into reality. The program will give me advanced knowledge in the field of electronic engineering in order to add a value to the company while simultaneously helping me bring my goals of creating a wider spread use of the company's services back to my country .Aside from the country's leading position in terms of technological development, I can honestly say I am not in a position to say I know much about South Korea. However I want to learn about the traditions and culture because I believe it had a great impact on making the country a leader in the technological field. Studying in South Korea is of great importance because it will help me gain a better knowledge in the field but also help me bring to reality my goals. I would be honored to earn my Master's Degree in South Korea. This program will satisfy my hunger to further my knowledge.

Scholarship / My idea is about making SAMSUNG the only leading company in Africa [10]

@Holt

what confuse me the most is i want to know about south Korean culture and tradition, the only thing i know is that they are highly motivated for working hard, for the rest do i have to lie about the things i don't know about it ? and i have removed what you implicate me to change hopefully .

Scholarship / My idea is about making SAMSUNG the only leading company in Africa [10]

@Holt i hope i have made some changes .thank you

I was barley 13 when I recognized that I have big dreams when it comes to technologies. I have always had great passion for computers and mobiles. I spent all part of my high school life in front of computers and mobile screens, trying to cause problems so that I can fix them. In the year 2011 I was given a government scholarship to go to university and was accepted at xxx institute of Technology, which is one of the best universities in Ethiopia. My desires to study was continuously high, after going through three years in Electrical Engineering (...)

Scholarship / My idea is about making SAMSUNG the only leading company in Africa [10]

@Holt
i have made changes based on what you inform me pls let me know if i have to improve it again .

I was barley 13 when I recognized that I have big dreams when it comes to technologies. I have always had great passion for computers and mobiles. I spent all part of my high school life in front of computers and mobile screens, trying to cause problems so that I can fix them. In the year 2011 I was given a government scholarship to go to university and was accepted at xxx institute of Technology, which is one of the best universities in Ethiopia. (...)