Posts by aceess
Name: Aashish Panta
Joined: Feb 26, 2017 |
Last Post: Feb 26, 2017
Threads: 1 Posts: 3
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From: Nepal School: Saint Xavier's College
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Writing Feedback /
Giving tips for your sister on Simple Ways to Save Money [8]
This is a light and very formal piece of writing. Maybe you should try to focus on using some strong vocabs. Also, the intent of this writing is not clearly mentioned, leaving this essay to be incomplete.
Student Talk /
How to train the speaking ability without partner? [27]
Hello there!! You can start with reading english daily newspapers. Some youtube channels are providing very informative videos about improving your english communication skills. Have a look at them. Also, atching english movies and TV series without subtitles would be a better option.
Scholarship /
3. What is your greatest strength? Weakness? [Interview Qsn] [6]
Please look my piece of writing here and comment if any editings are needed. Thank You all!!leadership power
Talking about my greatest strength, I have very appreciable leadership skills within myself. From my childhood to the present day, I have been given various opportunities to exercise the power of a leader. I have experienced successful democratic leaderships through being president on various clubs in school life, playing on intra-school cricket team, and even the organizer and team leader of various community service programs. However, I am not good at doing multitasks at the same time, but would love the opportunity to change it.
Writing
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