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Utkirbek

Mar 5, 2017

Student Talk / Hi everyone! Welcome at EssayForum thread. [414]

@Tetanya
Hi everybody. My name is Utkirbek. I'm from Uzbekistan. I think all of you are good at English. I want to improve my english. Do you have any Chats except this :)

Utkirbek

Mar 5, 2017

Scholarship / I have a strange, maybe negative feature.. SELF INTRODUCTION for KGSP [9]

@Holt
Good afternoon. Dear Holt. I'm loading my draft again. i tried to follow your instructions. I paid more attention to actual work experience. If you check my draft again, I'll be grateful. thank you in advance

I LOVE TO WIN AND TO BE AWARDED
My name is Utkirbek. I'm from Uzbekistan. I was born (...)

Having finished school I continued my study in lyceum. But at that time my mind was busy with new achievements and goals too. In last course of lyceum I have to choice one of high schools to continue my next step of education. There was not any difficulty, because my father is economist and my interest is only connected with economy, so I applied for Institute of Finance in Tashkent. My major was "banking".

During bachelor period there were many opportunities and competitions. Such kind of opportunities I had many. One of them was subject competition of students of Republic of Uzbekistan on the subject of "theory of economy". I won second rank in this competition. They say "When you get your first achievement, the rests get you themselves." He was absolutely right. After winning in subject competition I was awarded by "Shinhan Bank Foundation Group". Finally, I graduated institute in 2016.

We know that banks are important part of payment system of any country. In my opinion bankers are the strongest economists in the world. That's why I learned subjects which involve knowledge on banking and finance. Every year, at the end of every course we were ordered to bank internships. But we had one right. It was that we could choice what bank we would go. I was an intern at only joint stock commercial bank namely "Aloqabank" for whole bachelor period. I tried to learn more about bank system. During internship I knew that I had ability on banking and finance. Especially, Department of Securities was very interesting me. In bank I worked as a staff. I followed all regulations. So Chairman and other used to talk to like a banker. They offered me formal job, but I wanted to continue my study. So I applied for master's degree on "banking account". My Internship haven't stopped with this, because I am intern in this bank after lessons..

At the present time I'm learning Korean language. Learning Korean language will give more information about Korean people and their culture. In our national TV channels historical and modern Korean series are showed frequently. I think my interest to Korea began with this Korean series. You know that our country is located far from world ocean. But Korea is located near ocean. Korean people lifestyle is related to country location. There is no doubt that such kind of lifestyle always attract us.

Korean master degree is gate of future (...)

Utkirbek

Mar 5, 2017

Scholarship / I have a strange, maybe negative feature.. SELF INTRODUCTION for KGSP [9]

@Holt
Thank you for the time you spent to check my drafts Holt. I have a problem with work experience that you are asking me to write in my essay. I have no work experience since I`ve graduated the institute, because I applied for master`s degree of Tashkent Financial Institute and now I am a first year student at master`s. That`s why I haven`t worked yet. What do you suggest me do with it? Should I tell the truth or hide it? I am confused and can`t decicde what to do.

Utkirbek

Mar 4, 2017

Scholarship / I have a strange, maybe negative feature.. SELF INTRODUCTION for KGSP [9]

@Holt
Thank you very much for your advice. I tried to follow your instructions. And changed my self introduction draft. I think you will assess this draft as well. Thank you beforehand.

By the way, in first draft i had mistake with "liceum". The correct is "lyceum".

My name is Utkirbek. I'm from Uzbekistan. I was born in village which called "Muzbel". I was grown up there. And I love it all my life. Because of high interesting to learn I had to study in city school being away from home. I think everyone's destiny depends on his or her parents. My parents also are very important in my life. My father is good at math and very strict. That's why I always got good marks by my teachers. As a result, I was very interested in math in school period and this lead me interesting and attractive subject called economy. (...)

Utkirbek

Mar 4, 2017

Scholarship / I have a strange, maybe negative feature.. SELF INTRODUCTION for KGSP [9]

Hi, I'm applying for KGSP . I need your help in analyzing my self introduction letter. I'm not very good at writing.

SELF INTRODUCTION
oYour course of life, your view of life, study background, your hopes & wishes, etc
o Your education and work experience, etc., in relation to the KGSP program
o Your motivations for applying for this program
o Reason for study in Korea

I love to win and to be awarded

My name is Utkirbek. I'm from Uzbekistan. I was born in village which called "Muzbel". I was grown up there. And I love it all my life. Because of high interesting to learn I had to study in city school being away from home. I think everone's destiny depends on his or her parents. My parents also are very important in my life. My father is good at math and very strict. That's why I always got good marks by my teachers. As a result, I was very interested in math in school period and this lead me interesting and attractive subject called economy. I won the first rank in subject competition of pupils of Jizzakh city schools on the subject of "Economy". And I was awarded in the eyes of my peers. It was my first achievement. My parents were very happy and this situation promoted me more.

You know, I have a strange, maybe negative feature. It is that I like to be awarded in the eyes of my peers and when I participate in any competititon I intend to win second rank at least. But in others opininon this feature is considered as a negative.They mean that people mustn't try to be awarded in the eyes of others. But I ensure you this feature will lead you more quickly than other features. In anticipation of such kind of feelings I am building my lifestyle.

Having finished school I continued my study in lyceum. But at that time my mind was busy taht new achievements and goals too. In liceum, I won the first rank in subject competition of sudents of liceums and colleges in Jizzakh region on the subject of "Economy". in last course of liceum i have to choise one of high schools to continue my next step of education. There was not any difficulty, because my father is economist and my interest is only connected with economy, so I apllied for tashkent financial institute. During bachelor period there were many opportunities and competitions. They say "Bachelor diploma does not prove that you are excellent but it proves that you had many opportunities". Such kind of opportunities i had many. One of them is subject competition of students of Republic of Uzbekistan on the subject of "Theory of Economy". I won second rank in this competition., I graduated institute in 2016.

There was strict dean, Odil Sattarov in our faculty. We, all students respect him because of his several features. We used to listen more to him. He always said students promoting and emotional words. The most important for me among them is this: "When you get your first achievement, the rests get you themselves." He was absolutely right. After winning in subject competition I was awarded by "Shinhan Bank Foundation Group".

By the way my passion for learning languages made me choose to study foreign languages during bachelor period, when I studied Russian and English. At the present time I'm learning korean language. Learning language open will open new world and new opportunities. So I always try to learn new languages. You see, I'm learning Russian, English and Korean languages. Because these three language have power of the world. In my opinion Korean language is door of East, Russian is door of north and English is door of the rests of countries of world.

Korean master degree is gate of future which involves new achievements and awards. I beleive that in this condition KGSP will be stronghold of mine. Of course everyone has his or her interests in any kind of area. I have also my interests. Firstly, I want to be perfect specialist in my area, secondly, i shall be in attractive country and last one , I will have new freinds of course. I ensure you I'll try to be profitable for KGSP and Korea with my several features,such kind of hardworking and demanding.

The words above mentioned seems cruelty,but for me is comfortable to speak. I hope that you will accept