Writing Feedback / The honesty importance in a relationship [3]

For me, I CONSIDER HONESTY ESSENTIAL IN ALL ASPECTS OF LIFE, AND TELLING THE TRUTH FORMS A LARGE PART OF BEING HONEST WITH ONE ANOTHER.

FOR EXAMPLE, if A friend UNINTENTIONALLY MADE a mistake and admitted it, I WOULD BE INCLINED TO forgive HIM/HER. THE SAME CANNOT BE SAID OF SOMEBODY WHO DELIBERATELY LIED TO ME.......

"[F]reaking out and his face becomes yellow while he is talking." <----- I would avoid this type of sentence. It looks over emotional and the type of thing you might say to a friend, not write on an exam paper.

I hope this helps!

Спасибо,

Chris