lijing822
Mar 29, 2017
Writing Feedback / TOEFL ESSAY: FAMILY vs FORMAL EDUCATION [5]
@Holt@Whatsminmin
Thank you for your advice! I realize that i haven't given any relevant examples to prove the connection between parents and teacher, i was just talking about the advantage of family education, maybe.So i will rewrite this passageI know being logical is very important to English writing and i find it difficult for me but i will keep practicing. Thank you very much : )
@Holt@Whatsminmin
Thank you for your advice! I realize that i haven't given any relevant examples to prove the connection between parents and teacher, i was just talking about the advantage of family education, maybe.So i will rewrite this passageI know being logical is very important to English writing and i find it difficult for me but i will keep practicing. Thank you very much : )