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Apr 12, 2017
Writing Feedback / Where went majority of UK students since they finished their school? [4]
Please help me to check my first essay,
The diagrams compare and contrast data on the differences between the number of UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The number of UK graduate students was over seven times as high as the number of UK postgraduate students in all categories. The majority of UK graduate and postgraduate students decided to continue their study in higher education, it was 29.665 for UK graduate students whereas 2.725 for UK postgraduate students. On the other hand, the minority of them worked as a volunteer, it was 3.500 for UK graduate students while 345 for UK postgraduate students. Working in part-time was the second highest destination of UK graduate and postgraduate students, it was 17.735 for UK graduate students and 2.535 for UK postgraduate students. Unfortunately, a terrible condition happened. The number of unemployment UK graduate and postgraduate students was relatively high, it was almost a quarter of them.
Please help me to check my first essay,
Different goals of UK students
The diagrams compare and contrast data on the differences between the number of UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The number of UK graduate students was over seven times as high as the number of UK postgraduate students in all categories. The majority of UK graduate and postgraduate students decided to continue their study in higher education, it was 29.665 for UK graduate students whereas 2.725 for UK postgraduate students. On the other hand, the minority of them worked as a volunteer, it was 3.500 for UK graduate students while 345 for UK postgraduate students. Working in part-time was the second highest destination of UK graduate and postgraduate students, it was 17.735 for UK graduate students and 2.535 for UK postgraduate students. Unfortunately, a terrible condition happened. The number of unemployment UK graduate and postgraduate students was relatively high, it was almost a quarter of them.
