ninnin
Aug 28, 2009
Undergraduate / "About being American" - UC Essay Prompt #1. [9]
yeah i think the ending ideas are a good start (you basically got the idea down).. but the problem is that ur just making a statement.. try to support that statement with a particular personal experience...so that the admission officers will understand what you have gone through
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yeah i think the ending ideas are a good start (you basically got the idea down).. but the problem is that ur just making a statement.. try to support that statement with a particular personal experience...so that the admission officers will understand what you have gone through
btw, i just joined essayforum today! :D