dawez
Apr 26, 2017
Writing Feedback / Do you agree that free trade makes rich countries richer and poor countries poorer? [2]
Great essay and logic!
Has concern about- has concerned about
everything has its both sides- every coin has two sides(just to be fancier)
both poor and rich countries gain and loss in free trade- gain and lose
Finally, just a personal advice. It seems like in the conclusion you are neutral to both sides, but if it's an essay for TOEFL, ETS would favor those that stand firmly on one side.
Great essay and logic!
Has concern about- has concerned about
everything has its both sides- every coin has two sides(just to be fancier)
both poor and rich countries gain and loss in free trade- gain and lose
Finally, just a personal advice. It seems like in the conclusion you are neutral to both sides, but if it's an essay for TOEFL, ETS would favor those that stand firmly on one side.
