mikemorpheus
Sep 7, 2009
Writing Feedback / "A bizarre charm" - An essay on my most promising bad fortune. [4]
Thanks for your time and consideration for my essay.
Now, regarding the essay, it is not an assignment. I am writing it for a post in my blog. The above is the first 3 paragraphs of my post. It is followed by a funny story in which I was continuously been the suspect of some funny and no-so-harmful misfortunes for the 3 days. The purpose of this essay is to reminiscent these 3 days.
Now my point is that the reader should enjoy the funny story without imagining me as lighthearted or spiritless. Please help me with the vocabulary and grammar. I shall post the remaining part of the essay soon.
Thanks for your time and consideration for my essay.
Now, regarding the essay, it is not an assignment. I am writing it for a post in my blog. The above is the first 3 paragraphs of my post. It is followed by a funny story in which I was continuously been the suspect of some funny and no-so-harmful misfortunes for the 3 days. The purpose of this essay is to reminiscent these 3 days.
Now my point is that the reader should enjoy the funny story without imagining me as lighthearted or spiritless. Please help me with the vocabulary and grammar. I shall post the remaining part of the essay soon.