thunga2603
Jun 3, 2017
Writing Feedback / Australian teenagers and junk foods in their diet [4]
1. You wrote: ... of eaten per year for pizza, fish ...
Feedback: The article is missing before the noun: ''a pizza', 'the pizza''. (ART015)
2. You wrote: However, in 1985 it dived down slightly ...
Feedback: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply ''dived''.
1. You wrote: ... of eaten per year for pizza, fish ...
Feedback: The article is missing before the noun: ''a pizza', 'the pizza''. (ART015)
2. You wrote: However, in 1985 it dived down slightly ...
Feedback: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply ''dived''.
