chith5333
Jun 22, 2017
Scholarship / "self-introduction letter for master degree in finance" - the major is international relations [5]
Here is my revise, please help me to find out the best one, thanks
Moving is an activity of mine. Since I was five, I had to move to the town with my parents. Then next five years I moved to new house. My parents have to find the better place for earn money. Until now I am 21 and my parents told me that we have to move again. I understand why we have to move for our family income. My older sister and brother got married and move to another place. I live in the house with my parents and my younger sister. She is just 10. So I have to do everything to help my parents as I am an older child. My mother leave home at 4 PM and come back at 21 PM for selling food at the market as well as my father. My father is a truck driver. He always go out to another provinces and I just meet him twice a month. I take care both of my mother and my younger sister when my father go out. We are not get in touch too much but we are a warmly family when we are together. I need my family to live together and no more moving, so I make myself to be hard working person and pay attention to study. The result of my work hard made me become the second place of the best student in physical subject and I can get the good score in final year of high school. I have communication skills since I was child and I am very happy to help others for giving advices and being good listener. So I choose to study international Relations which I can use my skills to help others, make new foreign friends and learning new things in society.
In my university years, I join in many events and courses to practice my English and apply to be the leader of the Environment Protection Group. Two years in the group developed me a lot in terms of making fund proposal for holding activities, Planed the budget, coordinated with supporter, improved the members management systems and transfer environmental knowledge to children. I am very happy to help children to get deep understand about environment. At the same time I use all of opportunities for working in various careers in order to reducing the payments of the family. All of careers of mine started from worker and step forward to be an office staff. Working at noodle factory made me deeply understand how hard to earn money even one kip. I have to leave home at five, spend 3 hours in hot weather and use more energy every day for a kip of money. Then I was a waitress at the restaurant. I learned a lot how to communicate to customers. The waitress not seems to difference from worker in the noodle factory, the better is no working out door to face the hot weather. Last two jobs not give me enough money for payments, thus I apply to be a sale at the book shop. I work at foreign book shop which I develop my English conversations and get the better money. It was the best job I ever do, but I leave this job after I worked only 4 months. The most important of me is study so I leave the job for using all times with my final year at the university.
All of careers experiences provide me to be stronger for adapting in pressure situation and solving problems. My parents are the model for hard working person who never give up for life. I keep following as my parents to keep learning new thing which challenges or difficulties. I am not let's the time to past me by so I apply to work at the Company as the office staff until now during waiting for my bachelor diploma. As my attention for support my family income and helping others, I need to take more courses which it can enhance my degree. With international relations degree and accountant will make me reach my goal to help others. I will do the budget plan for free helping organizations in my country so I find out the scholarship to help me to get deep understand in accountant. As I know from my study that Taiwan is the best economy in Asia for finance and when I know that Taiwan's scholarship is opened, it realized me to get the best opportunity to enhance my higher education in Taiwan.
I am very glad to apply for 2018 National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology X Cathay United Bank International Master's Scholarship Program. I am much eager to adopt and know financial course. The master curriculum in finance at institute of technology, National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology, Taiwan introduces me to a wide variety of finance subjects. Various courses like investment mgmt seminar, Fin mgmt, Fin markets, Fin statement analysis, International finance & foreign exchange, Acct topic seminar and Chinese language class provided with a strong footing in the theoretical concept of finance. Special thing is the program will provide to intern at the Cathay United Bank which is the Taiwan's largest financial. I am really enthusiastic to attend a Master of finance and I strongly believe that my educational qualification and motive towards the subject matter makes me a suitable candidate for your program. Moreover, I feel I am responsible for making a big move in this field and this scholarship will give me a big chance to be the leader of the CUB's branch in my own town. The most important thing is my family income will better when I get this scholarship.
It is well-known that Taiwan is the best East Asia's economic where (....)
I appreciate your time and it will be a great honor for me to be a Master's student at National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. This scholarship will make a significant and positive impact on my ability to work with you in the future. I hope that you will acknowledge my interest and will give me a chance to study in the Asia Top University like National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology in Taiwan. I would like to thank you in advance for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing positive respond.
Here is my revise, please help me to find out the best one, thanks
Moving is an activity of mine. Since I was five, I had to move to the town with my parents. Then next five years I moved to new house. My parents have to find the better place for earn money. Until now I am 21 and my parents told me that we have to move again. I understand why we have to move for our family income. My older sister and brother got married and move to another place. I live in the house with my parents and my younger sister. She is just 10. So I have to do everything to help my parents as I am an older child. My mother leave home at 4 PM and come back at 21 PM for selling food at the market as well as my father. My father is a truck driver. He always go out to another provinces and I just meet him twice a month. I take care both of my mother and my younger sister when my father go out. We are not get in touch too much but we are a warmly family when we are together. I need my family to live together and no more moving, so I make myself to be hard working person and pay attention to study. The result of my work hard made me become the second place of the best student in physical subject and I can get the good score in final year of high school. I have communication skills since I was child and I am very happy to help others for giving advices and being good listener. So I choose to study international Relations which I can use my skills to help others, make new foreign friends and learning new things in society.
In my university years, I join in many events and courses to practice my English and apply to be the leader of the Environment Protection Group. Two years in the group developed me a lot in terms of making fund proposal for holding activities, Planed the budget, coordinated with supporter, improved the members management systems and transfer environmental knowledge to children. I am very happy to help children to get deep understand about environment. At the same time I use all of opportunities for working in various careers in order to reducing the payments of the family. All of careers of mine started from worker and step forward to be an office staff. Working at noodle factory made me deeply understand how hard to earn money even one kip. I have to leave home at five, spend 3 hours in hot weather and use more energy every day for a kip of money. Then I was a waitress at the restaurant. I learned a lot how to communicate to customers. The waitress not seems to difference from worker in the noodle factory, the better is no working out door to face the hot weather. Last two jobs not give me enough money for payments, thus I apply to be a sale at the book shop. I work at foreign book shop which I develop my English conversations and get the better money. It was the best job I ever do, but I leave this job after I worked only 4 months. The most important of me is study so I leave the job for using all times with my final year at the university.
All of careers experiences provide me to be stronger for adapting in pressure situation and solving problems. My parents are the model for hard working person who never give up for life. I keep following as my parents to keep learning new thing which challenges or difficulties. I am not let's the time to past me by so I apply to work at the Company as the office staff until now during waiting for my bachelor diploma. As my attention for support my family income and helping others, I need to take more courses which it can enhance my degree. With international relations degree and accountant will make me reach my goal to help others. I will do the budget plan for free helping organizations in my country so I find out the scholarship to help me to get deep understand in accountant. As I know from my study that Taiwan is the best economy in Asia for finance and when I know that Taiwan's scholarship is opened, it realized me to get the best opportunity to enhance my higher education in Taiwan.
I am very glad to apply for 2018 National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology X Cathay United Bank International Master's Scholarship Program. I am much eager to adopt and know financial course. The master curriculum in finance at institute of technology, National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology, Taiwan introduces me to a wide variety of finance subjects. Various courses like investment mgmt seminar, Fin mgmt, Fin markets, Fin statement analysis, International finance & foreign exchange, Acct topic seminar and Chinese language class provided with a strong footing in the theoretical concept of finance. Special thing is the program will provide to intern at the Cathay United Bank which is the Taiwan's largest financial. I am really enthusiastic to attend a Master of finance and I strongly believe that my educational qualification and motive towards the subject matter makes me a suitable candidate for your program. Moreover, I feel I am responsible for making a big move in this field and this scholarship will give me a big chance to be the leader of the CUB's branch in my own town. The most important thing is my family income will better when I get this scholarship.
It is well-known that Taiwan is the best East Asia's economic where (....)
I appreciate your time and it will be a great honor for me to be a Master's student at National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. This scholarship will make a significant and positive impact on my ability to work with you in the future. I hope that you will acknowledge my interest and will give me a chance to study in the Asia Top University like National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology in Taiwan. I would like to thank you in advance for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing positive respond.