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Name: Anna Li
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dinosps9a4   
Jul 21, 2017
Student Talk / Hi everyone! Welcome at EssayForum thread. [413]

Hi, Tanya and everyone :), my name is Anna.
I'm from Taiwan, a lovely Island located on southeast Asia.
Found this site when I was trying to improve my IELTS writing tasks, still new here but I'm for sure going to learn a lot form all these articles and users, they all seems to give great tips!

It is lovely that you created this thread, it would be great to make some new friends!!
dinosps9a4   
Jul 21, 2017
Student Talk / What are the ways to improve my essay writing? [17]

@jassu88
If you have any books about IELTS at hand, they should include tips or instructions that will answer your questions.
The official website of IELTS also provides these kinds of information.
Check those two resources if you would like to obtain anything further.
dinosps9a4   
Jun 20, 2017
Writing Feedback / Should museums charge for admission? Benefits and drawbacks. [5]

Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantage of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?


museums and entrance fee



There is a large number of museums around the world, while some choose to charge their visitors for admission, some decided to remain free. My view is that it is more beneficial for museums to charge an entrance fee and in this essay I will explain why.

The first point to make is that there are some downsides to charing people for admission, but these are relatively minor. Firstly, the museum might have fewer visitors after they start charing people. It is possible for some people to think that the exhibition they held is not worth the money. On top of that, if the museum is free to enter, visitor are more likely to be willing to go to the same exhibition more than once. Secondly, if the purpose of a museum is to educate the public, it is considered to be accessible by everyone in the society. By requiring an entrance fee, it may become difficult for poor people to have a chance of going into the museum.

When we turn to the other side of the argument, there are also some points to make. Considering any museum needs money to run properly, an extra income will help holding exhibitions with better quality. With sufficient funds, the museum will also be able to hire more employees to maintain the space, set up exhibitions, or even do a public tour. The other point is that when money is charged, visitors tend to focus more on the experience they are having inside the museum, not taking it for granted. It is undeniable that some people go into the museum just to avoid the bad weather outside.

In conclusion, I understand the point of view of people who think museums should not charge any entrance fee. However, it is outweighed by the positive impact of charing visitor for admission.
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