Writing Feedback / "Spending all your free time studying is not a good idea" What's your opinion? Write an essay. [6]

Things I have to write about:
-hobbies and activities
-preparing for the future
-your own idea

140-190 words

My essay:

Study even in a leisure time?

I agree with the statement because I firmly believe that people should have enough time to cultivate their interests.

First of all, we all have hobbies and activities we enjoy doing, they're a big part of our daily lives and putting them aside in order to focus on studying is not a good idea, as we need some time to relax and clear our minds.

Furthermore, studying is not the only way to prepare for the future. It is certainly very important, but I think that all kinds of experiences will help you broaden your knowledge, without having to spend all your spare time learning things from textbooks.

Having said that, some people say that spending your free time studying is still more productive than spending it surfing on the Internet. While that may be true, I believe that we need to concentrate on other activities once in a while. Otherwise, we can get fed up with studying very easily.

On the whole, I think we should be able to balance the time we spend studying and the one we dedicate to our personal interests.