Writing Feedback / I wrote this essay about travelling, I have never done before [7]

I wrote again... let me know , what do you think
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Nowadays, Travelling is the kind of activity, which almost all the people love. For some people, it is an opportunity to relax and abstract from everyday hectic life and also it is interesting to learn about other cultures, therefore traveling has more advantages.

For one thing, traveling helps us to experience new things and open our minds to the outside world, moreover, get the opportunity to meet people from different places. Secondly, experiencing different cultures can be enlightening and educational. One of the ways to learn about a different culture is to travel. For example, when we get a chance to take part in local celebrations we can discover similarities and differences between cultures,

However, there are people who are unhappy when they hear the word "travel", and they will say that traveling is unpleasant and involves a lot of stress due to the necessity to pack their things, use public transport and so on.

To sum up, I think traveling has tremendous educative, informative and social value because traveling increases our knowledge and widens our perspective.

Writing Feedback / I wrote this essay about travelling, I have never done before [7]


@Holt
Dear Holt,

I am in the high school and I am studying English to get my FCE.