BENJI31
Aug 19, 2017
Scholarship / 'Teaching English Language' - MY CHEVENING LEADERSHIP/INFLUENCER ESSAY------- Bankole Akinfolarin [5]
Sorry i took long to revert, you have such a brilliant example of leadership and i think you are not doing justice to it here. allow the story to come through first and then worry about grammar later, i think because you are an English teacher you paid too much attention to the English correctness than telling your story. having said that though this has potential to be a brilliant essay, please see my few corrections below.
while thirty percent was receptive but no help- the rest were receptive but not helpful. My passion for education never ... My passion of being an educator motivated me to solder on and assist this community despite the lack of interest from stakeholders.
Some of them would optout of school for the market ... rather go to the market day than attend school. I then knew then that their sense (...) and I had to come insomeone had to intervene.
Personally I met with the King ... I took it upon myself to meet the King of the region to....
Sorry i took long to revert, you have such a brilliant example of leadership and i think you are not doing justice to it here. allow the story to come through first and then worry about grammar later, i think because you are an English teacher you paid too much attention to the English correctness than telling your story. having said that though this has potential to be a brilliant essay, please see my few corrections below.
while
Some of them would opt