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Name: Ngambia Audrey
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Aug 19, 2017
Writing Feedback / Ielts 2: Comic, Books, Radio, TV, Film, Theater - Advantages and disavantages. [2]

@tran14
I think your essay is good but you need to cross-check your vocabulary and sentence structure
for example, since they are enjoyed by a huge number of[the] global population and
can easily [approach to all types and ranges of age of the audience.]---- the sentence is not very clear.
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