SeilaKey
Sep 21, 2017
Scholarship / Are You Really Can Change Yourself? - KGSP Self Introduction [3]
Thank You so much :) I'll do my best
Thank You so much :) I'll do my best
SeilaKey
Sep 20, 2017
Scholarship / Are You Really Can Change Yourself? - KGSP Self Introduction [3]
Heloo it's me again!
I tried to make corrections about my self introduction for applying KGSP.
I'll very grateful if you guys gladly help me to read thread and give me your advise. :)
I grew up in ordinary middle class family. As the oldest child, I have always felt the duty to be responsible for my family since that is how I was raised. Both of my parents were not educational practitioners, my father is a businessman and so is my mother. They really attach importance of education and never forced me to do what I had to do, instead they told me that what I am doing now will affect what will happen to my future and no one can change me before I change myself. This view makes me always do the best of my effort if I want to get the best future and never regret in every path that I have chosen.
I had a bad life school-aged experience when I got the lowest mathematics examination's score of my class in elementary school. I like mathematics, but I really knew that I lacked of learning. I studied hard to make my score better and did mathematics exercise more than before. I believe that I can change my score as long as I never stop learning. Surprisingly I've got excellent score and be number one rank in my class. Since then, I like to solve mathematics problems and like to help my friends that have difficulties with mathematics problems. That is the reason why I got attracted to mathematics and led me to be how I am now with this special career that I am proud of.
The fact that Education is not only the learning of facts but also the training of the mind to think led me want to be one of professional in education who influences people's way of thinking. So that I decided to start my study at University of Bengkulu in 2012 majoring Mathematics Education and got full scholarship from Indonesian Government. My first year was pretty hard because I have difficulties to adapt college-life specially in doing some difficult courses such as Kalkulus and System Geometry but I didn't even think about giving up. During those years, I was able to improve my academic skill in Algebra, Geometry, Statistics, Teaching Theory and developed my teaching practical skill such as designing teaching materials and evaluating teaching process. I was seriously doing my college that was showed in my great GPA score. I got ninety five percent excellent grade and trusted to be a Lecture's assistant in Calculus and Learning Method subjects in my second year. Not only in academic ways, I also joined and involved in many social and charity activities of several organizations. I and my friends who have same visions taught children in a small village in our province without salary and gave them some Mathematics Learning Media for free. It makes me grateful because I was given a great chance to continue my study to University when people out there have trouble even looking for food. I have been working as a Mathematics Tutor in Gama Sains and private teacher for 3 years. It makes me more capable of either theory or practice as a teacher and enough to continue my study in Master degree.
Education is an increasingly dynamic and demanding sector that requires highly qualified professionals and practitioners to meet challenges especially in developing countries like Indonesia. For being that professionals and practitioners, we really know that so many things we must know and capable of. Education itself has so many sectors, one of its sectors is Curriculum and Instruction. My knowledge that I got from college and curriculum issues in Indonesia develop my interest to study this sector of education. This sector has a big impact on education system, so that if I learn about it I will have a chance to give a big impact too in education, either as professional teacher or professional researcher of education. Korea has gotten a huge perception shift in my mind and the minds of people all over the world. Right now, the world is marveling at the emergence and success of Korea which is in largely not only because of its media and entertainment industry but also because of its quality of education. In Korea postgraduate education education is internationally recognized for both teachers and practitioners of researcher. Post-graduate for the Faculty of Education in Korea has specialized research programs, distinguished faculty such as curriculum and instruction faculty that focus on curriculum and teaching curriculum research. So that, I really know that studying this sector of education in Korea is my necessary. To study abroad, I realize that I must know everything about my destination country, then I seriously effort by learning about Korean language and cultures in Korean Cultural Center Indonesia (KCCI) in Jakarta and scheduled to get TOPIK Test before going to Korea.
After I decided to try to continue my master degree in Korea, I also tried to find the scholarship that could link my background study with my purpose to study in Korea. I thankfully found Graduate Korean Government Scholarship Program (KGSP-G). I am not looking for scholarship that only provides tuition fee and life cost but the scholarship that provides great programs in many aspects such academic aspect, social and charity aspect, Korean language, Korean historical and cultural aspect. Therefore I will not have experienced in academics aspect only, but also chances to learn out of my comfort zone. I have read about KGSP guideline and very excited about its program. Before getting to college, I will learn about Korean language in other university that I have chosen and I have known that KGSP also engages guarantees visit Korean historic place such as palace, cultural center,etc. It was an amazing scholarship program that I have ever known. I can imagine how grateful and blessed I am if I get chance to study in Korean and helped by KGSP to explore my knowledge beyond my major of study. I can not wait about it
Heloo it's me again!
I tried to make corrections about my self introduction for applying KGSP.
I'll very grateful if you guys gladly help me to read thread and give me your advise. :)
No one can change you before you chage yourself.
I grew up in ordinary middle class family. As the oldest child, I have always felt the duty to be responsible for my family since that is how I was raised. Both of my parents were not educational practitioners, my father is a businessman and so is my mother. They really attach importance of education and never forced me to do what I had to do, instead they told me that what I am doing now will affect what will happen to my future and no one can change me before I change myself. This view makes me always do the best of my effort if I want to get the best future and never regret in every path that I have chosen.
I had a bad life school-aged experience when I got the lowest mathematics examination's score of my class in elementary school. I like mathematics, but I really knew that I lacked of learning. I studied hard to make my score better and did mathematics exercise more than before. I believe that I can change my score as long as I never stop learning. Surprisingly I've got excellent score and be number one rank in my class. Since then, I like to solve mathematics problems and like to help my friends that have difficulties with mathematics problems. That is the reason why I got attracted to mathematics and led me to be how I am now with this special career that I am proud of.
The fact that Education is not only the learning of facts but also the training of the mind to think led me want to be one of professional in education who influences people's way of thinking. So that I decided to start my study at University of Bengkulu in 2012 majoring Mathematics Education and got full scholarship from Indonesian Government. My first year was pretty hard because I have difficulties to adapt college-life specially in doing some difficult courses such as Kalkulus and System Geometry but I didn't even think about giving up. During those years, I was able to improve my academic skill in Algebra, Geometry, Statistics, Teaching Theory and developed my teaching practical skill such as designing teaching materials and evaluating teaching process. I was seriously doing my college that was showed in my great GPA score. I got ninety five percent excellent grade and trusted to be a Lecture's assistant in Calculus and Learning Method subjects in my second year. Not only in academic ways, I also joined and involved in many social and charity activities of several organizations. I and my friends who have same visions taught children in a small village in our province without salary and gave them some Mathematics Learning Media for free. It makes me grateful because I was given a great chance to continue my study to University when people out there have trouble even looking for food. I have been working as a Mathematics Tutor in Gama Sains and private teacher for 3 years. It makes me more capable of either theory or practice as a teacher and enough to continue my study in Master degree.
Education is an increasingly dynamic and demanding sector that requires highly qualified professionals and practitioners to meet challenges especially in developing countries like Indonesia. For being that professionals and practitioners, we really know that so many things we must know and capable of. Education itself has so many sectors, one of its sectors is Curriculum and Instruction. My knowledge that I got from college and curriculum issues in Indonesia develop my interest to study this sector of education. This sector has a big impact on education system, so that if I learn about it I will have a chance to give a big impact too in education, either as professional teacher or professional researcher of education. Korea has gotten a huge perception shift in my mind and the minds of people all over the world. Right now, the world is marveling at the emergence and success of Korea which is in largely not only because of its media and entertainment industry but also because of its quality of education. In Korea postgraduate education education is internationally recognized for both teachers and practitioners of researcher. Post-graduate for the Faculty of Education in Korea has specialized research programs, distinguished faculty such as curriculum and instruction faculty that focus on curriculum and teaching curriculum research. So that, I really know that studying this sector of education in Korea is my necessary. To study abroad, I realize that I must know everything about my destination country, then I seriously effort by learning about Korean language and cultures in Korean Cultural Center Indonesia (KCCI) in Jakarta and scheduled to get TOPIK Test before going to Korea.
After I decided to try to continue my master degree in Korea, I also tried to find the scholarship that could link my background study with my purpose to study in Korea. I thankfully found Graduate Korean Government Scholarship Program (KGSP-G). I am not looking for scholarship that only provides tuition fee and life cost but the scholarship that provides great programs in many aspects such academic aspect, social and charity aspect, Korean language, Korean historical and cultural aspect. Therefore I will not have experienced in academics aspect only, but also chances to learn out of my comfort zone. I have read about KGSP guideline and very excited about its program. Before getting to college, I will learn about Korean language in other university that I have chosen and I have known that KGSP also engages guarantees visit Korean historic place such as palace, cultural center,etc. It was an amazing scholarship program that I have ever known. I can imagine how grateful and blessed I am if I get chance to study in Korean and helped by KGSP to explore my knowledge beyond my major of study. I can not wait about it
SeilaKey
Sep 20, 2017
Scholarship / I learn Korea and Korean language intensively, from now on - essay for KGSP [5]
Nada, we have some destination country ! :)
but, if you write the study plan based on KGSP Guidline, it will be good.
there is 2 kind of information that you have to write :
1. Goal of study, title or subject of research, and detailed study plan
2. Future plan in Korea or another country after study in Korea
Nada, we have some destination country ! :)
but, if you write the study plan based on KGSP Guidline, it will be good.
there is 2 kind of information that you have to write :
1. Goal of study, title or subject of research, and detailed study plan
2. Future plan in Korea or another country after study in Korea
SeilaKey
Sep 20, 2017
Graduate / Application essay for MA in Fashion Marketing [4]
Hello Fatima :)
it might be useful if you read the guideline of your kind of essay. It usually shows the information what you have to write in your essay and makes you focus to discuss something you want to.
Hello Fatima :)
it might be useful if you read the guideline of your kind of essay. It usually shows the information what you have to write in your essay and makes you focus to discuss something you want to.
SeilaKey
Sep 3, 2017
Graduate / How to look stand out in your self introduction of KGSP Graduate [4]
@Holt
hello, me again!
i'm sorry holt, but i really confused what i have to write in my first part of my essay, here is one of my correction that i tried to make. would you give me some advises or maybe some corrections please? which part should i add more?
Thanks before :)
I grew up in ordinary middle class family. As the oldest child, I have always be responsible person for my family since that is how I was raised. Both of my parents were not educational practitioners, my father is a businessman and so is my mother. They really attach importance of education proven by the fact that I graduated from college in middle class family means that my parents did their best effort to help me gain a better education in order to have chances at a better career. My parents never forced me to do what I had to do, instead they told me that what I am doing now will affect what will happen to my future. That's how my parents taught me that only myself can change my future, not others.
@Holt
hello, me again!
i'm sorry holt, but i really confused what i have to write in my first part of my essay, here is one of my correction that i tried to make. would you give me some advises or maybe some corrections please? which part should i add more?
Thanks before :)
I grew up in ordinary middle class family. As the oldest child, I have always be responsible person for my family since that is how I was raised. Both of my parents were not educational practitioners, my father is a businessman and so is my mother. They really attach importance of education proven by the fact that I graduated from college in middle class family means that my parents did their best effort to help me gain a better education in order to have chances at a better career. My parents never forced me to do what I had to do, instead they told me that what I am doing now will affect what will happen to my future. That's how my parents taught me that only myself can change my future, not others.
SeilaKey
Sep 3, 2017
Graduate / How to look stand out in your self introduction of KGSP Graduate [4]
@Holt
Thank you so much for your big help. i'll make some corrections soon. :)))
@Holt
Thank you so much for your big help. i'll make some corrections soon. :)))
SeilaKey
Aug 30, 2017
Graduate / How to look stand out in your self introduction of KGSP Graduate [4]
This sentence is probably simple, but for me its mean is more than that. It is probably an over-simplified description of life, but it does describe life. It does describe that you can't rely your life on someone or something. It makes you believe that your success is no warranty. You might be pay an expensive tuition in school and hope after you graduated you will absolutely success but it really doesn't make sense. You might be dropped by someone but as long as you try your best to success, it will happen. This sentence has a big role in my mind that no one can ensure my success, more than I believe that I will and I can change my life as long as I never give up about it. My mother always told me that the luck is made by ourself. We do our best effort then get the great achievement, that is the luck. We love someone and someone loves us back, that is the luck. That is how my mother influences me that we must create our own luck to make our life means. It such a good relation between that sentences meaning and my mother's advise.
At the time when I was in highschool, I was very curious about what is the most basic in people life? What is the most basic that influences people of thinking? What is the most basic that determining people's attitude? Till this curiosity brought me to the conclusion that the most basic thing is Education. People are born then get the first education from their parents. How their parents educate them is forming their characteristics. People are schooled formally, how they educated by their teacher, what kind of education they have chosen, all of that influence their way of thinking and their way to treat others. I finally decided to take educational field for my undergraduate study majoring mathematics education, besides learning more about education, people around the world in any subjects use mathematics therefore my knowledge can be useful for more people.
I was the one of five students that got full scholarship from Indoesian Government called Bidikmisi in my department. I was very grateful because from this scholarship I was not only getting free tuition but also a lot of useful trainings and seminar such as Free Toefl Preparation Class, Training of Leadership, Seminar of Children and Adult Education, etc. I was seriously doing my college life that was showed in my great GPA score. I got ninety five percent excellent grade and trusted to be a Lecture's assistant in Calculus and Learning Method subjects. Not only in academic ways, I also involved in many social and charity activities. I and my friends who have same visions taught children in a small village in our province without salary and gave them some Mathematics Learning Media for free. It makes me grateful because I was given a great chance to continue my study to university when people out there have trouble even looking for food.
For being someone that able in educational field, I think that I must improve my knowledge and my experiences in it. I aspire to go to study abroad learning more about education in country that has best education, then I decided to choose South Korea as my destination place to continue my master degree. Korea has gotten a huge perception shift in my mind and the minds of people all over the world. Right now, the world is marveling at the emergence and success of Korea which is in largely not only because of its media and entertainment industry but also because of its quality of education. Korea became one of the countries in the world with the best quality education version of OCED, 2015. To study abroad, I realize that I must know everything about my destination country, then I seriously effort by learning about Korean people language, cultures, history, etc in Korean people Cultural Center Indonesia (KCCI) in Jakarta. I also improve my daily conversation ability in Korean people language by watching Korea TV programs, following Korean people Instagram accounts, trying to make friends with Korean people,etc. I like Korea not only due to its quality of education, but also due to Korean people manner in politeness, modesty, respect for parents and many more. I have heard that in Korea muslims are not too difficult to get food like in Europe because Korean people often tell which foods are allowed and should not be eaten by a Muslim. It is a great chance of me if I can continue my master degree in Korea.
After I decided to try to continue my master degree in Korea, I also tried to find the scholarship that could link my background study with my purpose to study in Korea. I thankfully found Graduate Korean Government Scholarship Program (KGSP-G). I am not looking for scholarship that only provides tuition fee and life cost but the scholarship that provides great programs in many aspects such academic aspect, social and charity aspect, Korean language, Korean historical and cultural aspect. Therefore I will not have experienced in academics aspect only, but also chances to learn out of my comfort zone. I have read about KGSP guideline and very exited about its program. Before getting to college, I will learn about Korean language in other university that I have chosen and I have known that KGSP also engages guarantees visit Korean historic place such as palace, cultural center,etc. It was an amazing scholarship program that I have ever known. I can imagine how grateful and happy I am if I get chance to study in Korean and helped by KGSP to explore my knowledge beyond my major of study. I can not wait about it.
No one can change you before you change yourself.
This sentence is probably simple, but for me its mean is more than that. It is probably an over-simplified description of life, but it does describe life. It does describe that you can't rely your life on someone or something. It makes you believe that your success is no warranty. You might be pay an expensive tuition in school and hope after you graduated you will absolutely success but it really doesn't make sense. You might be dropped by someone but as long as you try your best to success, it will happen. This sentence has a big role in my mind that no one can ensure my success, more than I believe that I will and I can change my life as long as I never give up about it. My mother always told me that the luck is made by ourself. We do our best effort then get the great achievement, that is the luck. We love someone and someone loves us back, that is the luck. That is how my mother influences me that we must create our own luck to make our life means. It such a good relation between that sentences meaning and my mother's advise.
At the time when I was in highschool, I was very curious about what is the most basic in people life? What is the most basic that influences people of thinking? What is the most basic that determining people's attitude? Till this curiosity brought me to the conclusion that the most basic thing is Education. People are born then get the first education from their parents. How their parents educate them is forming their characteristics. People are schooled formally, how they educated by their teacher, what kind of education they have chosen, all of that influence their way of thinking and their way to treat others. I finally decided to take educational field for my undergraduate study majoring mathematics education, besides learning more about education, people around the world in any subjects use mathematics therefore my knowledge can be useful for more people.
I was the one of five students that got full scholarship from Indoesian Government called Bidikmisi in my department. I was very grateful because from this scholarship I was not only getting free tuition but also a lot of useful trainings and seminar such as Free Toefl Preparation Class, Training of Leadership, Seminar of Children and Adult Education, etc. I was seriously doing my college life that was showed in my great GPA score. I got ninety five percent excellent grade and trusted to be a Lecture's assistant in Calculus and Learning Method subjects. Not only in academic ways, I also involved in many social and charity activities. I and my friends who have same visions taught children in a small village in our province without salary and gave them some Mathematics Learning Media for free. It makes me grateful because I was given a great chance to continue my study to university when people out there have trouble even looking for food.
For being someone that able in educational field, I think that I must improve my knowledge and my experiences in it. I aspire to go to study abroad learning more about education in country that has best education, then I decided to choose South Korea as my destination place to continue my master degree. Korea has gotten a huge perception shift in my mind and the minds of people all over the world. Right now, the world is marveling at the emergence and success of Korea which is in largely not only because of its media and entertainment industry but also because of its quality of education. Korea became one of the countries in the world with the best quality education version of OCED, 2015. To study abroad, I realize that I must know everything about my destination country, then I seriously effort by learning about Korean people language, cultures, history, etc in Korean people Cultural Center Indonesia (KCCI) in Jakarta. I also improve my daily conversation ability in Korean people language by watching Korea TV programs, following Korean people Instagram accounts, trying to make friends with Korean people,etc. I like Korea not only due to its quality of education, but also due to Korean people manner in politeness, modesty, respect for parents and many more. I have heard that in Korea muslims are not too difficult to get food like in Europe because Korean people often tell which foods are allowed and should not be eaten by a Muslim. It is a great chance of me if I can continue my master degree in Korea.
After I decided to try to continue my master degree in Korea, I also tried to find the scholarship that could link my background study with my purpose to study in Korea. I thankfully found Graduate Korean Government Scholarship Program (KGSP-G). I am not looking for scholarship that only provides tuition fee and life cost but the scholarship that provides great programs in many aspects such academic aspect, social and charity aspect, Korean language, Korean historical and cultural aspect. Therefore I will not have experienced in academics aspect only, but also chances to learn out of my comfort zone. I have read about KGSP guideline and very exited about its program. Before getting to college, I will learn about Korean language in other university that I have chosen and I have known that KGSP also engages guarantees visit Korean historic place such as palace, cultural center,etc. It was an amazing scholarship program that I have ever known. I can imagine how grateful and happy I am if I get chance to study in Korean and helped by KGSP to explore my knowledge beyond my major of study. I can not wait about it.