zackyyy
Sep 1, 2017
Undergraduate / My unique feature. Being resistant to adversity. University of Virginia supplement Essay [3]
Please suggest me how to start
Please suggest me how to start
zackyyy
Aug 31, 2017
Undergraduate / Why Tulane? This University is the one for me. Essay Assistance [4]
Don't praise the university. Don't say they are esteemed; they know it.. Overall its fine.
Why don't you start outright and delete the first paragraph.. It's sort of hackneyed and adcom are tired of seeing such phrases and sentence" I fell in love"
Don't praise the university. Don't say they are esteemed; they know it.. Overall its fine.
Why don't you start outright and delete the first paragraph.. It's sort of hackneyed and adcom are tired of seeing such phrases and sentence" I fell in love"
zackyyy
Aug 31, 2017
Undergraduate / Common app essay - Constructive Disaster? My transformation into a strong person. [3]
You've done a great job. It would be fantastic if you would remove the preliminary information and delve into your period of realization of your maturity..
Overall that's great. You've played nicely with your words
You've done a great job. It would be fantastic if you would remove the preliminary information and delve into your period of realization of your maturity..
Overall that's great. You've played nicely with your words
zackyyy
Aug 31, 2017
Undergraduate / My unique feature. Being resistant to adversity. University of Virginia supplement Essay [3]
Please do comment...
We are a community with quirks, both in language and in traditions. Describe one of your quirks and why it is part of who you are.
A hope-neutraliser tablet as soon as I wake up, doubt-generator syrup after the lunch and a regret-stimulator dose from injection before I sleep.
Listen-but don't tell anybody- I am an optimist and all aforementioned tablets and syrups are the prescription that Dr. Pessy (MBBS, Doubt Medical University) offered to cure my disease.
I was 6 years old when my parents realized that I had this unfavorable quality. When my RC helicopter would lost track of the remote and break down upon striking onto the grounds, I wouldn't cry; instead, I would start jumping in a hope that my new toy would come soon. When my father got a brain stroke and the doctors told he would never be able to walk, I was still smiling- smiling in a thought that he won't have to leave us for his job and would stay with us at home forever.
I hope, by now, you are well acquainted with the severity of my disease. But I believe, this disease is a unique feature bestowed upon me in this struggle-of-existence. It has galvanized me to retaliate against the obstacles that intermittently pop out of nowhere. Knowing that there is light at the end of every tunnel has always prevented me from drowning in despair and tackling the problems without escaping from them.
After all, we are such a miniature object living inside a speck of dust in this universe. Why not live it like if it were a game where victory is sure!
Please do comment...
We are a community with quirks, both in language and in traditions. Describe one of your quirks and why it is part of who you are.
a light at the end of the tunnel
A hope-neutraliser tablet as soon as I wake up, doubt-generator syrup after the lunch and a regret-stimulator dose from injection before I sleep.
Listen-but don't tell anybody- I am an optimist and all aforementioned tablets and syrups are the prescription that Dr. Pessy (MBBS, Doubt Medical University) offered to cure my disease.
I was 6 years old when my parents realized that I had this unfavorable quality. When my RC helicopter would lost track of the remote and break down upon striking onto the grounds, I wouldn't cry; instead, I would start jumping in a hope that my new toy would come soon. When my father got a brain stroke and the doctors told he would never be able to walk, I was still smiling- smiling in a thought that he won't have to leave us for his job and would stay with us at home forever.
I hope, by now, you are well acquainted with the severity of my disease. But I believe, this disease is a unique feature bestowed upon me in this struggle-of-existence. It has galvanized me to retaliate against the obstacles that intermittently pop out of nowhere. Knowing that there is light at the end of every tunnel has always prevented me from drowning in despair and tackling the problems without escaping from them.
After all, we are such a miniature object living inside a speck of dust in this universe. Why not live it like if it were a game where victory is sure!