Posts by Ejumakayshun

Ejumakayshun

Sep 7, 2017

Student Talk / What are the ways to improve my essay writing? [17]

@JessieCarpenter
Well you can always look to he internet for influence. Not cheating, but just ideas of how your essay can be written. Also, you can talk to a teacher. Multiple teachers work well. And sometimes, just come back to your essay just for like 15-30 minutes a day and make some changes. Good luck!

Oh, and I also like to brainstorm or make bullet point outlines before starting the essay so I know where I'm going with my thoughts. Making an outline is a really good way to organize your thoughts.

Ejumakayshun

Sep 7, 2017

Scholarship / 'I made some successful modification' - leadership and influence question [4]

@ashraf mohamed
LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE QUESTION

I ~~have worked in~~ work at a power station (...) 2014,. ~~I work harder~~ My job is to solve several problems ~~such~~ to increases the life of (...) problem, ~~and~~ solveing it, and setting schedules to program to and maintain the equipment.

... 2014. ~~does some modification in~~I modified the system to ...
From 2010 to 2012, I ~~worked~~served in the military,. I was responsible for fixingold cars and tanks,; or . the problem was it stopped daily, so I made some successful modifications of to themotor and gearbox ...

Ejumakayshun

Sep 7, 2017

Scholarship / Describe your most meaningful achievements and how they relate to your field of study and/or future [4]

Hey, does it need to be longer? It's supposed to be LESS than 500 words but I feel like it should be longer.
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nurse assistant certificate

One of my most meaningful achievements was recently obtaining a certificate as a nurse assistant. This related to my field of study, which is pre-medicine, because now, I can gain better patient care experience and work in the healthcare field. Also, I can gain clinical experience from any healthcare setting. These healthcare settings include nursing homes, clinics, hospitals, hospice facilities, and even specialty facilities.

This achievement also contributes to my future goals because I want to become a pediatrician. Gaining patient care experience is very beneficial to my future goals because I can put them on my resume as well as my application for medical school. Showing that I have a certification in healthcare as well as patient care experience will make my application more competitive and make me a better candidate for admission into medical school.