ALAM121
Sep 27, 2017
Scholarship / Four points of the Personal Statement for UGRAD Exchange program (250 word limit) [3]
Hi, everyone
Please review my essay and please do point out any mistakes or the improvements that can be made.
My entire life changed on one evening of the year 2003 when my father was diagnosed with 4th stage of blood cancer. As a 6-year-old, this was a strange time yet a time around which my personality evolved. As all kids would, I found happiness in the toughest of times and since then I began to find positivity no matter how tough life was.
Be it competitions or my nonacademic activities, I have always been a very active student. I participated in debates, sports, music and was a part of the student council for most of O & A levels. I also being a member of NGO "Pakistan Speaks" have worked on numerous welfare project. I also write articles for the same NGO to raise awareness on different issues.
To excel, I would need to the dig in the immensity of my field by expanding my boundaries. I want to learn about cultures, ethics, and perceptions of different people. I want to attain the ability to commute from conceptual reasoning to concrete applications and therefore aspire to be a researcher. I want present efficient solutions to issues for the present and the future.
From space sciences to Artifical intelligence, US is in the forefront in the research arena. Through UGRAD I will experience science analysis from superior institutes and learn from accomplished researchers. I want to transfuse the same atmosphere in Pakistan where one could work on innovative ideas. I will also broadcast the positivity of country to create an everlasting bond between the two cultures.
Hi, everyone
Please review my essay and please do point out any mistakes or the improvements that can be made.
broadcasting the american positivity to Pakistan
My entire life changed on one evening of the year 2003 when my father was diagnosed with 4th stage of blood cancer. As a 6-year-old, this was a strange time yet a time around which my personality evolved. As all kids would, I found happiness in the toughest of times and since then I began to find positivity no matter how tough life was.
Be it competitions or my nonacademic activities, I have always been a very active student. I participated in debates, sports, music and was a part of the student council for most of O & A levels. I also being a member of NGO "Pakistan Speaks" have worked on numerous welfare project. I also write articles for the same NGO to raise awareness on different issues.
To excel, I would need to the dig in the immensity of my field by expanding my boundaries. I want to learn about cultures, ethics, and perceptions of different people. I want to attain the ability to commute from conceptual reasoning to concrete applications and therefore aspire to be a researcher. I want present efficient solutions to issues for the present and the future.
From space sciences to Artifical intelligence, US is in the forefront in the research arena. Through UGRAD I will experience science analysis from superior institutes and learn from accomplished researchers. I want to transfuse the same atmosphere in Pakistan where one could work on innovative ideas. I will also broadcast the positivity of country to create an everlasting bond between the two cultures.
