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monthly income of the bookshop in NYC

the chart below shows the sales income of a new york city bookstore for three types of products throughout last year

Data that compares last year's monthly revenue of the bookshop in New York City is provided in the line graph. Overall, despite a decline in the middle of the year, Newspaper accounted for the highest figure. The sales income of magazine experienced a downward fluctuation whereas that of newspaper remained relatively constant at the bottom during a surveyed year.

Looking at the graph, in January, the highest amount of money was found in Novels, at $12000. For the next 2 years, there was a plateau of its figure prior to a steadily drop to a low of $100000 in income by June. Subsequently, the trend witnessed an upsurge to reach a high of $150000 by the end of the year. Regarding magazines, its revenue began the year with $60000. The trend then underwent a gradual fall to $30000 by August before leveling off until the end of the year.

In contrast, novels generate the lowest income figures. However, sales were quite stable with the income of $20000 in each month of the year

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