paola_alba2
Nov 4, 2017
Undergraduate / Moving from one country to another is a CHALLENGE [5]
Hi, this is my first time using this website, and it would be pretty helpful if any of you can help me fix my personal statement.
I accept any suggestions.
250 are the words limit.
My Country of birth is Dominican Republic, and I moved a year ago to the United States of America, in which they made me repeat 11th grade because of my age and also because of an amount of credits that I needed. Through this whole high school year, I always tried to do the best that I could to get a GPA above 90 in most of my classes, even though I basically was learning a new language (English) during that whole year. My weakest subject during the high school year was US History because of the different dates, events, the sequence of events, etc, that we are supposed to remember in this class. I wasn't good at all on this object, but I always tried to do the best that I could for a good great and for my knowledge of this subject. I ending passing this class with 90s and passing my Regents exam with a good grade because all the effort that put in this subject. After knew that US History wasn't my strongest subject, I really found that Math was what I was really good at. Math for me is always a change that I have to be dealing every single day for diverse of world problems. Math is a subject in which you never stop learning new thing, so that's how I found my passion and what I really want to pursue in college.
Hi, this is my first time using this website, and it would be pretty helpful if any of you can help me fix my personal statement.
I accept any suggestions.
250 are the words limit.
my personal statement
My Country of birth is Dominican Republic, and I moved a year ago to the United States of America, in which they made me repeat 11th grade because of my age and also because of an amount of credits that I needed. Through this whole high school year, I always tried to do the best that I could to get a GPA above 90 in most of my classes, even though I basically was learning a new language (English) during that whole year. My weakest subject during the high school year was US History because of the different dates, events, the sequence of events, etc, that we are supposed to remember in this class. I wasn't good at all on this object, but I always tried to do the best that I could for a good great and for my knowledge of this subject. I ending passing this class with 90s and passing my Regents exam with a good grade because all the effort that put in this subject. After knew that US History wasn't my strongest subject, I really found that Math was what I was really good at. Math for me is always a change that I have to be dealing every single day for diverse of world problems. Math is a subject in which you never stop learning new thing, so that's how I found my passion and what I really want to pursue in college.
