hoyospatricia89
Nov 5, 2017
Undergraduate / A personal experience, about when my dad was deployed to various places with the British Army [3]
You have to change the word moons, because you need to look formal in your essay and that reference will not help you with the academic or bussines style.
Another adviece I could give you is that if you want to indrocuce "about when my dad was deployed to various places such as", you need to show it on the first paragraph as a part of introduction.
was many moons ago,
You have to change the word moons, because you need to look formal in your essay and that reference will not help you with the academic or bussines style.
Another adviece I could give you is that if you want to indrocuce "about when my dad was deployed to various places such as", you need to show it on the first paragraph as a part of introduction.
