Writing Feedback / Some people argue that cars should be banned in city centres while others are against this idea. [5]

Hi!
I think the 3rd paragraph is kind of off the point. The topic says "ban cars in city centres", which is quite different from "ban cars". So you might lose some score in "task response".

I am not a native so I could give little advice on the sentence structure or alternative of words...Feel sorry for that.
Good luck to you: )