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Lyipheoryia   
Nov 29, 2017
Undergraduate / My deep desire to help others. UBC Personal Profile [2]

Tell us about who you are



How would your family, friends, and/or members of your community describe you? If possible, please include something about yourself that you are most proud of and why. (maximum 250 words)

I have a deep desire to help others, and I am happiest when my actions bring joy to those around me. After learning the shocking rates of senior depression and increasing numbers of elderly abuse cases, I wanted to give seniors in my community a reason to smile. I am proud to create Cards for Humanity, a project dedicated to giving handmade Christmas Cards to seniors in care homes. Small acts of kindness can make a big change, and I want each senior to experience a truly merry Christmas.

Whether it be establishing a Model UN conference to ensure accessibility for all students or hosting job fairs as part of Charity Brighouse - I take pride in giving opportunities to others. As a Junior Instructor for Geering Up, I gave gifted and physically disabled students an opportunity to to pursue their interests in science, technology, engineering, and math. I ensured that every student felt safe and comfortable, and I worked with other Junior Instructors to create inclusive, engaging activities.

Everyone has the ability to change someone's life, and I realized this as a Reading Buddy at the public library. As a new immigrant from China, my student struggled to make friends. Together, we worked on improving her English and on building her self-esteem. As she left the library after our last tutoring session, I was filled with unspeakable pride knowing that I had given her both the opportunity to in a new country and the confidence to make a friend.

Any and all feedback is welcomed. My answer is currently at 249 words.
Lyipheoryia   
Nov 29, 2017
Undergraduate / UBC - Tell us more about one or two activities [4]

@Michell20
I agree with Holt's advice. Your MUN sounds very impressive, and while your experiences volunteering for the orphanage are heartwarming to hear - it doesn't seem to be as impactful as your MUN career.

However, as a fellow student applying to UBC, I empathize with wanting to fill up 2 out of 2 activities. If you truly want to write about the orphanage, I would suggest focusing not just on what you did, but also how your actions directly impacted the children. I would suggest describing why you chose to volunteer with that particular orphanage, and perhaps also mentioning where the donated items would go (Were they donated for the children? Was this orphanage in an impoverished area? Etc, etc).
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