Essays / Writing a diagnostic essay -Introducing yourself [6]

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that was very nice beginning, but can you explain what the quote means?

okay so carefully writing down all the information I need

let's see...

Bill Asher is the name I am using since I have arrived to Canada eight years ago. With no training with English reading and writing, getting my high school diploma in Canada makes me feel proud but difficult. My recent educational achievement is a Mechanical Engineering Design Option diploma from Lakehead University.

When people say that reading is a easy task that everyone can do, I beg differ. I actually am troubled with reading the essential meaning from the information that I read. Unlike mechanical drawings, reading texts from a book takes effort and time to understand what the author is trying to say.

Writing, on the other hand, makes writers to think who the audiences are, what kind of information should be included, or what vocabulary should be used. For example, employee has given a technician a series instruction of drawing a gear set. That instruction should include the details of units, size, and the location of gears. If the employee uses hard vocabularies in the instruction, the technician will waste his precious time to look up the vocabularies from a dictionary.

I don't know if I am off topic or not. But I think I mix up the requirement that the instructor gives

Sorry for giving you so much work about my writing

Thanks again