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Rainfall in Johannesburg and Cape Town

These two bar graphs show the annual rainfall in Johannesburg and Cape Town from january to December as indicated on the x-axis.The y-axis indicates the amount of rainfall from 0 to 120 millimeters in each month.

In January Johannesburg experiences rainfall about 150 millimeters of downfall.Similarly,Cape Town has almost 110 millimeters of rainfall in June.futhermore,Johannesburg has the least rainfall in June while Cape Town has the highest rainfall in the same month.Johannesburg has got more downfall from October to March than Cape Town.Nevertheless,Cape Town sees more downfall from April to September than Johannesburg.

As we can see from overall shape of these bar graphs,Johannesburg has got high rainfall from October to March and low rainfall from April to September.Opposite to this,Cape Town has got high rainfall from April to September and low rainfall from October to March.

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  Cope Town
  
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  Johannesburg