giga28giga
Mar 19, 2018
Undergraduate / Acting as a true ambassador of my country. UGRAD Personal Statement [3]
@Holt
Thank you for your comment I appreciate it. Unfortunately, I wasn't chosen as UGRAD participant and now I am trying to figure out why and find my mistakes, and I really appreciate any advice and suggestion.
I have a question. Is it clear for a reader that I am talking about UGRAD? I mean the part when I write about Fulbright scholarship. Is it possible that a person may get confused whether this personal statement is for UGRAD or for Fulbright?
For a transition paragraph should I write something like this?: "Except for academic and leadership skills development participating in the program would give me an opportunity to expand my previous volunteering experience and give me a chance to share it with my volunteering group members and across my community." and after that I will talk about my volunteering in more details and how I would spread it.
And what do you think about the paragraph when I talk about my hobbies and joining local clubs? Is it needed or should I just remove it?
Thank you in advance.
@Holt
Thank you for your comment I appreciate it. Unfortunately, I wasn't chosen as UGRAD participant and now I am trying to figure out why and find my mistakes, and I really appreciate any advice and suggestion.
I have a question. Is it clear for a reader that I am talking about UGRAD? I mean the part when I write about Fulbright scholarship. Is it possible that a person may get confused whether this personal statement is for UGRAD or for Fulbright?
For a transition paragraph should I write something like this?: "Except for academic and leadership skills development participating in the program would give me an opportunity to expand my previous volunteering experience and give me a chance to share it with my volunteering group members and across my community." and after that I will talk about my volunteering in more details and how I would spread it.
And what do you think about the paragraph when I talk about my hobbies and joining local clubs? Is it needed or should I just remove it?
Thank you in advance.