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Jan 6, 2018
Writing Feedback / Why we are producing more and more rubbish? Most of the waste are the plastic bags. [6]
I'm not the best at English, but I corrected everything I could. I may have missed a few things.
"... every individual is generating lot of waste material"
Up to you, but I would change the wording in this opening sentence to something like, "There is no doubt that today the waste material humanity is generating cannot be eternally contained
Subsequent paragraphs
... common materialwhich is used by ...
Once they are used, they are often thrown in the garbage which adds to the trash problem.
... they burn the plastic bags
As a consequence ...
... introduce the strict policies to ban the plastic bags ...
... an excessive part ...
This issue could be resolved if people only cooked, required food, or they fed the ... food tothe beggars, pets, or anything that could eat it.
As a result,
a clear, insurmountable
If we follow these steps and the government introduces policy
I'm not the best at English, but I corrected everything I could. I may have missed a few things.
"... every individual is generating lot of waste material"
Up to you, but I would change the wording in this opening sentence to something like, "There is no doubt that today the waste material humanity is generating cannot be eternally contained
Subsequent paragraphs
... common material
Once they are used, they are often thrown in the garbage which adds to the trash problem.
... they burn the plastic bags
.
As a consequence ...
... introduce
... an excessive part ...
This issue could be resolved if people only cooked, required food, or they fed the ... food to
As a result,
If we follow these steps and the government introduces policy