Jon Wang
Jan 10, 2018
Writing Feedback / Ieles Task-1 The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia. [3]
The column chart gives information about the places visited by different people in Australia.
For the people born in Australia, they like visiting cinema most. There are about 70% visitors from population born in Australia. The following group having interest in cinema is 63% new migrants born in English-speaking countries, and 50% new migrants born in other countries. The people come from non-English-speaking countries like visiting library most. However, new migrants from English-speaking countries have more interest in cinema.
As we can see, Cinema is most popular place, and then is library. Zoo also is a popular choice for people from English-speaking countries. Theatre is not so popular like other places. There are just 10% new migrants born in non-English-speaking countries often visit it.
Over, different background make people have different choices for visiting places. Cinema is most popular in all over the groups.
australians on the go
The column chart gives information about the places visited by different people in Australia.
For the people born in Australia, they like visiting cinema most. There are about 70% visitors from population born in Australia. The following group having interest in cinema is 63% new migrants born in English-speaking countries, and 50% new migrants born in other countries. The people come from non-English-speaking countries like visiting library most. However, new migrants from English-speaking countries have more interest in cinema.
As we can see, Cinema is most popular place, and then is library. Zoo also is a popular choice for people from English-speaking countries. Theatre is not so popular like other places. There are just 10% new migrants born in non-English-speaking countries often visit it.
Over, different background make people have different choices for visiting places. Cinema is most popular in all over the groups.
