Writing Feedback / IELTS: student's basic curriculum - with or without art? [5]

Some people think art is an essential subject while others think it's a waste of time.Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

art should not be judged as a waste of time teaching

There is a discussion regarding whether the art can be seen as a fundamental curriculum for schoolchildren .Some believe that learning art at school is completely useless ,which I strongly disagree. This essay is going to present main reasons about this controversial topic.

Undoubtedly , art has a significant and unparalleled reputation in our history for thousands years .We can see great works from carving on the rocks by ancient people to valuable paintings ,magnificent classical music ,well-known novels nowadays.We have to admit that our life is surround by ubiquitous a variety of art .therefore it is necessary for children to learn art at school .If we want to have a close look at how human beings use creativity ,how famous artists take advantage of anything available to make fascinating works ,how art has been changed our life and will continuously have an marked impact on us in future .

However ,some believe that it is not worthwhile to teach children any art at school. unlike other subjects such as mathematics ,chemistry and biology ,art is not a specific and elementary subject but more like abstract and obscure language for children to grasp and master .furthermore ,teachers couldn't find precise comments to evaluate students,they may just say "you are gifted " .But how gifted ?what degree of it ?how can I feedback properly when teachers review artistic homework ?Obviously , it is easy to come up with scores if miscalculation made in math paper. So when the educational system of art between teachers and students couldn't work out functional like wheels and chains .people started to doubt the necessity of existence of art.

Although art is different from other subjects,it should not be judged as a waste of time teaching .In fact ,learning art is meaningful. you are learning how to identify things from different perspective ,when you are listening to music teacher playing Mozart and he is explaining what the beauty behind the notes.

Like what I discussed above , art is an essential subject as equal as other basic curriculum .Children should be encouraged to know more about arts .