baobei841130
Sep 14, 2009
Letters / My Job App-- Some Descriptions for my current job and expectations [5]
I'm applying for a new job in an international company, and I've got several problems in my resume because English is my second language. I hope someone can help me with it, especially some grammar and logical problems.!! thnx a lot!!!
PART OF MY RESUME GOES AS FOLLOWS:
Job Description:
Currently I am working as a sales coordinater and manager assistant in the sales department of xxx, one of the largest shipping companies in the world. I am in charge of the lines of Euro, Med., Southeast Asia, Africa and Australia. My job includes container and customer analysis, loading rate, and the contact and coordination with HQ, customers domestic and overseas, branches in other countries and other partner shipping companies( xxx, xxx, etc.) Meanwhile, I'm responsible for part of DG cargo affairs--sending manifests.
Self-assessment:
After three year's working experience as a sales assistant, I master the professional skills of export maritime transportation well. I am able to manage normal conditions and emergencies, satisfying the demands of different customers with a strong communicating ability. Moreover, a good command of English enables me to successfully cope with customers domestic and overseas.
Expectations:
I hope to set a sound basis for a better development in my career by using my professional knowledge combined with working practice. I would always like to rise to challenges, and I desire to join in a company of solid foundation to get a collaborative development for both of us. I believe that based on what I have learned, I will create great merit if you choose me!
I'm applying for a new job in an international company, and I've got several problems in my resume because English is my second language. I hope someone can help me with it, especially some grammar and logical problems.!! thnx a lot!!!
PART OF MY RESUME GOES AS FOLLOWS:
Job Description:
Currently I am working as a sales coordinater and manager assistant in the sales department of xxx, one of the largest shipping companies in the world. I am in charge of the lines of Euro, Med., Southeast Asia, Africa and Australia. My job includes container and customer analysis, loading rate, and the contact and coordination with HQ, customers domestic and overseas, branches in other countries and other partner shipping companies( xxx, xxx, etc.) Meanwhile, I'm responsible for part of DG cargo affairs--sending manifests.
Self-assessment:
After three year's working experience as a sales assistant, I master the professional skills of export maritime transportation well. I am able to manage normal conditions and emergencies, satisfying the demands of different customers with a strong communicating ability. Moreover, a good command of English enables me to successfully cope with customers domestic and overseas.
Expectations:
I hope to set a sound basis for a better development in my career by using my professional knowledge combined with working practice. I would always like to rise to challenges, and I desire to join in a company of solid foundation to get a collaborative development for both of us. I believe that based on what I have learned, I will create great merit if you choose me!
