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Name: Firno Adih Arta
Joined: Apr 8, 2018
Last Post: Apr 21, 2018
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firno   
Apr 21, 2018
Scholarship / AAS Supporting Statement, Why Master of Sustainable Energy? Solutions for global energy challenges [3]

1. Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?



Master of Sustainable Energy is one of the courses which will give to the student the ability to create a solution against complex global energy challenges. Presently, energy, one of main needs in our life, has become global issue in various countries in the world with a variety of matters including Indonesia. For instance, the reserve of nonrenewable energy becomes less and less because more than 90% of energy utilization is from which is fossil energy such as coals, oils, and gasses. Therefore, I want to find a solution to this case by taking energy course.

My passion is to pursue my further education in new and renewable energy, I need to find a university that can provide me with strong practical knowledge on interdisciplinary viewpoint (use collocation). I did some research on cricos.education.gov.au to find the university appropriate for my goal and I found Master of Sustainable Energy at The University of Queensland which meets to my purpose. I believe that this program provided by The University of Queensland is designed to fit the students a huge understanding of aspects in energy industry such as energy generation, distribution, and supply. Furthermore, the program will develop professional skill which can integrate the latest in energy technologies, climate science, policy, and energy markets.
firno   
Apr 21, 2018
Scholarship / I will apply nursing education in Monash University - AAS 2018 [4]

I will apply nursing ...
This sentence ruins its paragraph structure. is it form general-specific or specific-general.
in my opinion you could remove this sentence or put the idea in the end paragraph.

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