Book Reports / "catcher in the rye" - thesis statement [6]

In catcher in the rye, Salinger uses the repetition of particular words and phrases to further express the confusion and frustration of Holden Caulfield. Three major examples of words and phrases that are used as motifs include,'phonies','that kills me' and 'if you want to know the truth'.

this is my thesis statement. do you think is it okay?
it has to be
arguable: the reader can legitimately disagree
specific: name precise details, such as characters and literary techniques
clear: easily understandable
succinct: se minimal words to state the point