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Jul 10, 2018
Writing Feedback / Some people were born with their special talent, others must be trained to gain such skills [4]
This is a writting task 2 in ielts exam :
It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become good sports person or musician.
Discuss the two ideas giving your opinion. ==> i am m ielts practice beginer. this is my first essay, please help me to improve my writting skill. Thanks in advance.
Nature and nurture - two normal issues in our life. Some people were born with their special talent. However, some rest is not and they must be trained to become profession. My two cents, Practice is a key which is not only turning a natural talent become more profession, but also making impossible into possible.
First and foremost, some children has their own talents because of genetic origin, which make them excel than others. For instance, a boy has flexible legs which help him run faster than his friends. However, if he is deprived of practise, his talent will become nothing special.
On the other hand, a child who was born with no talents and he/she want to have some special things to make himself/herself become out standing. The only way they can do is that find things they love and practise every day. That way will boot them to high profession and excel.
On the whole, when we do something with endeavour, we will have good results. Nothing is impossible if we do our best with massive effort.
nature and nurture
This is a writting task 2 in ielts exam :
It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become good sports person or musician.
Discuss the two ideas giving your opinion. ==> i am m ielts practice beginer. this is my first essay, please help me to improve my writting skill. Thanks in advance.
Nature and nurture - two normal issues in our life. Some people were born with their special talent. However, some rest is not and they must be trained to become profession. My two cents, Practice is a key which is not only turning a natural talent become more profession, but also making impossible into possible.
First and foremost, some children has their own talents because of genetic origin, which make them excel than others. For instance, a boy has flexible legs which help him run faster than his friends. However, if he is deprived of practise, his talent will become nothing special.
On the other hand, a child who was born with no talents and he/she want to have some special things to make himself/herself become out standing. The only way they can do is that find things they love and practise every day. That way will boot them to high profession and excel.
On the whole, when we do something with endeavour, we will have good results. Nothing is impossible if we do our best with massive effort.
