giatocmang
Aug 29, 2018
Writing Feedback / IELTS Cambridge 1 Practice - the Australian Bureau of Meteorology - writing report [2]
my advice: you should paraphrase more on the topic sentence. for example
The diagram illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology receives, processes and broadcasts information on the weather through different media.
note that this is not a report
P/s: I may be pathetic:)
my advice: you should paraphrase more on the topic sentence. for example
The diagram illustrates how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology receives, processes and broadcasts information on the weather through different media.
note that this is not a report
P/s: I may be pathetic:)
