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Oct 11, 2018
Undergraduate / My Bucket List 1.SELECT ONE EXAMPLE HAVEN'T FINISHED IN YOUR BUCKET LIST 2.HOW TO FINISH THIS GOAL [3]
Hi, this is the first time I post there, but I am not a native speaker. I come from Taiwan where we use traditional Chinese as our mother language. So, thank you to recommend and recorrect my assay.
THE FIRST PARAGRAPH: SELECT ONE EXAMPLE HAVEN'T FINISHED IN YOUR BUCKET LIST.
THE SECOND PARAGRAPH: HOW TO FINISH THIS GOAL?
As a proverb declares, "where there is a will, there is a way." We can set some goals however hard to achieve them. Yet, the items we selecting sometimes are too difficult for us to fulfill them. As far as I am concerned, making a fortune is my top priority. However, I can't just suddenly make it happen. I need to nurture my technique which is potential and profitable over a long-term that takes times. I decide to take a computer engineer as my occupation in the future, for I may design a program like Facebook or Google which is not only famous but juicy. Maybe I will become the next Bill Gates someday!
By virtue of achieving this dream, I must learn English well first, since all the program language are based on it. If I don't study it well, I will never understand the meaning of lines of codes, not to mention becoming an ace engineer. Second, collect some idea in any field because computers are almost connected with every aspect of global industry that can help me to design the most suitable software for those people in need. Last but certainly not least, spreading my relationship can not only encounter some career partners but some resource I will probably need int the future. Even Steve Jobs who is talented but arrogant couldn't found Apple company without his partners as well. To sum up, albeit this road is doomed to be harsh, I believe the success will knock my door real soon!
My Bucket List
Hi, this is the first time I post there, but I am not a native speaker. I come from Taiwan where we use traditional Chinese as our mother language. So, thank you to recommend and recorrect my assay.
THE FIRST PARAGRAPH: SELECT ONE EXAMPLE HAVEN'T FINISHED IN YOUR BUCKET LIST.
THE SECOND PARAGRAPH: HOW TO FINISH THIS GOAL?
As a proverb declares, "where there is a will, there is a way." We can set some goals however hard to achieve them. Yet, the items we selecting sometimes are too difficult for us to fulfill them. As far as I am concerned, making a fortune is my top priority. However, I can't just suddenly make it happen. I need to nurture my technique which is potential and profitable over a long-term that takes times. I decide to take a computer engineer as my occupation in the future, for I may design a program like Facebook or Google which is not only famous but juicy. Maybe I will become the next Bill Gates someday!
By virtue of achieving this dream, I must learn English well first, since all the program language are based on it. If I don't study it well, I will never understand the meaning of lines of codes, not to mention becoming an ace engineer. Second, collect some idea in any field because computers are almost connected with every aspect of global industry that can help me to design the most suitable software for those people in need. Last but certainly not least, spreading my relationship can not only encounter some career partners but some resource I will probably need int the future. Even Steve Jobs who is talented but arrogant couldn't found Apple company without his partners as well. To sum up, albeit this road is doomed to be harsh, I believe the success will knock my door real soon!
