Stella Zhang
Nov 4, 2018
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK2 - Should people look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched place? [3]
Hi there, please give me some advice about the essay below. Thanks!
With the increasing demand for energy resources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such places?
With the development of industry,we need more and more energy sources. There is someone that advice that people can explore these resources in some unexploited regions. But i believe this method would bring two opposite effects.
It is not an easy thing to exploit the energy resources in the remote area. At first, this is quite difficult for the team, which causes them to cost a long time and spend a lot of money. The operating costs are so huge that we could not afford it in a short time. Besides, as for the unexploited area, we will face so many unpredictable troubles as we do not have efficient and corresponding measures to solve that with our limited knowledge. More importantly,if we always rely on searching a new place to meet our constantly resource needs, there was a day that we cannot find any an alternative place.Therefore, looking for a new place cannot address the shortage of energy sources fundamentally.
However, there is no denying that exploring the remote area can benefit their economies. For instance, with the exploiting of the region, which enables to promote the relevant industry there, such as tourism, transportation and local public facilities. After that development, it will attract more talents and increase more job opportunities. But we cannot ignore that some energy sources are non-renewable resoures, which means that we would face the energry source scarcity again in the future.
In conclusion, i believe the fundamental way is to develop sustainable development rather than look for another place to consume.
Hi there, please give me some advice about the essay below. Thanks!
With the increasing demand for energy resources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such places?
in search for energy sources on earth
With the development of industry,we need more and more energy sources. There is someone that advice that people can explore these resources in some unexploited regions. But i believe this method would bring two opposite effects.
It is not an easy thing to exploit the energy resources in the remote area. At first, this is quite difficult for the team, which causes them to cost a long time and spend a lot of money. The operating costs are so huge that we could not afford it in a short time. Besides, as for the unexploited area, we will face so many unpredictable troubles as we do not have efficient and corresponding measures to solve that with our limited knowledge. More importantly,if we always rely on searching a new place to meet our constantly resource needs, there was a day that we cannot find any an alternative place.Therefore, looking for a new place cannot address the shortage of energy sources fundamentally.
However, there is no denying that exploring the remote area can benefit their economies. For instance, with the exploiting of the region, which enables to promote the relevant industry there, such as tourism, transportation and local public facilities. After that development, it will attract more talents and increase more job opportunities. But we cannot ignore that some energy sources are non-renewable resoures, which means that we would face the energry source scarcity again in the future.
In conclusion, i believe the fundamental way is to develop sustainable development rather than look for another place to consume.
