Scholarship / Self-introduction essay to get a graduate scholarship in Korea [6]

Study plan in Korean University (Science and Technology)

Hi everyone, I would really appreciate if you guys could review my self-introduction essay to get a graduate scholarship in Korea. I'm not a native English speaker so please let me know if I have any incorrect grammar. Thank you!!!

Summary/prompt
- Self-introduction

Self-introduction

I am an undergraduate student at Danang University of Science and Technology - The University of Danang (DUT-UD), my major is Control and Automation Engineering. The reason I choose engineering is that I always have a strong passion for research and solving problems around society.

Besides knowledge, Engineering school have taught me to be a perseverant, hard-working and creative person. During my undergraduate course, I have involved in various research projects such as a portable reading device for the blind, self-balancing robot and line-following robot using PID controller, smart self-study system in the Danang University of Technology using Machine Learning and Electrical menu for restaurants in Vietnam.

Due to the desire of researching project, I have attended in many scientific research conferences and was awarded "The first prize winner of Amazon EduHackathon coding competition 2017" held by Amazon Web Service in Vietnam.

Furthermore, I have also attended in various social activities during my undergraduate course in DUT-UD such as a student exchange program in Japan, guitar club and volunteer club. Those activities, especially the exchange program has built up my passionate about study abroad and thus became my dream after graduated.

I would like to study in Korea because technology in Korea is much more advance compares to Vietnam and I hope someday I could bring what I learn in Korea to solve everyday problems in Vietnam.