Chris bella
Nov 11, 2018
Scholarship / Helping the Poor - MasterCard scholarship Application essay [3]
Thank you very much for the review.
Thank you very much for the review.
Chris bella
Nov 10, 2018
Scholarship / Helping the Poor - MasterCard scholarship Application essay [3]
Hi, I would really appreciate if you guys could help review my essay.
Q: we want to know what excites you and what you are passionate about. Please write about a topic that is important to you and this reflect on your personal values (50 - 250)
Being a girl child who has gone through sexual harassment in other to get help from people in my final class in high school after my dad who was the financial bearer of the family fell ill. After I over and the challenges, I was motivated to help those in need especially children, girls and women.
Helping people in need gives me this extraordinary happiness and sense of satisfaction especially when they smile thankfully. Seeing those smiles on their faces gives me inner joy knowing am the reason behind the smile.
This passion for helping people motivated me to join some community initiatives and women empowerment programs whose aim is to help the less privileged in the community. I contributed to the program by volunteering and campaigning for funds to help the less privileged children go back to school.
Charity, compassion, and fairness are my core values, I believe in giving humanity a chance because everyone has an equal right to happiness no matter their situation. I being a girl who has gone through financial difficulties hope to create community initiatives targeted at empowering the poor especially young girls.
Hi, I would really appreciate if you guys could help review my essay.
Q: we want to know what excites you and what you are passionate about. Please write about a topic that is important to you and this reflect on your personal values (50 - 250)
Helping the poor
Being a girl child who has gone through sexual harassment in other to get help from people in my final class in high school after my dad who was the financial bearer of the family fell ill. After I over and the challenges, I was motivated to help those in need especially children, girls and women.
Helping people in need gives me this extraordinary happiness and sense of satisfaction especially when they smile thankfully. Seeing those smiles on their faces gives me inner joy knowing am the reason behind the smile.
This passion for helping people motivated me to join some community initiatives and women empowerment programs whose aim is to help the less privileged in the community. I contributed to the program by volunteering and campaigning for funds to help the less privileged children go back to school.
Charity, compassion, and fairness are my core values, I believe in giving humanity a chance because everyone has an equal right to happiness no matter their situation. I being a girl who has gone through financial difficulties hope to create community initiatives targeted at empowering the poor especially young girls.
