Posts by wuyulon1

wuyulon1

Dec 21, 2018

Undergraduate / AIF of Waterloo university - Computer Science or Actuarial Science [4]

Thanks for your advice.
But I have some confusions about your advice. Firstly, if I move the first sentence, there is no sentence about educational goal. For the second sentence, I think my first project raise my interesting in Computer Science, and I don't get the reason why I need to remove that. In addition, I find that I didn't go over the character limit in this version, and I still had about 62 character left. Finally, I have already mention about co-op, and I have no idea I should talk about which aspect of reason except ranking.

Thanks again, have a nice day.

wuyulon1

Dec 20, 2018

Undergraduate / AIF of Waterloo university - Computer Science or Actuarial Science [4]

REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO

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PLEASE TELL US ABOUT YOUR EDUCATIONAL GOALS, YOUR INTEREST IN YOUR CHOSEN PROGRAM(S), AND YOUR REASONS FOR APPLYING TO THE UNIVERSITY OF WATERLOO. IF YOU HAVE APPLIED TO MORE THAN ONE PROGRAM PLEASE DISCUSS YOUR INTEREST IN EACH PROGRAM. (900 CHARACTER LIMIT)

I am eager to pursue a degree in Computer Science or Actuarial Science. When I utilized the basic knowledge that I learned in high school to create my first project, which was a Chinese game called Gobang, I felt a great sense of achievement. My prodigious passion for solving difficult questions in programming and mathematics has led me to choose Computer Science or Actuarial Science as my major in the future. Waterloo is my dream university, not only because of the high standard of education, but also because I am really attracted by the co-op program in Waterloo. In my opinion, practice in real life is one of the best means to absorb the knowledge and acquire the social skills to make me be more successful in my future careers, and I can not wait to get boundless chances to grow and gain work experience in the co-op program.(838 characters)

Could someone fixes the grammar or word problems for me, and feel free to give me some advice.