Glubbo
Jan 13, 2019
Undergraduate / An 'Insufferable Know-It-All' - Who You Are - UBC Uni Writing Prompt 2019 [3]
The first sentence could be more active, instead of saying a... is how my..teachers describe me you could put "my elementary teachers would often call me as an..."
It's good but it needs more background information, I want to know why you were called nerdy or what happened in your past, how did you come to this point in your life, what were the challenges you had to face to get here? things like that. Overall good paragraph! :) (i'm not great at english so you don't have to take my advice/opinion)
The first sentence could be more active, instead of saying a... is how my..teachers describe me you could put "my elementary teachers would often call me as an..."
It's good but it needs more background information, I want to know why you were called nerdy or what happened in your past, how did you come to this point in your life, what were the challenges you had to face to get here? things like that. Overall good paragraph! :) (i'm not great at english so you don't have to take my advice/opinion)
