Writing Feedback / "My future job" - revise an essay; I allways want to be a designer [5]

Hi all,
I'm Vietnamese and i have some problem with writting an essay.I don't know how to write an essay and my vocabulary is bad.

Can you help me, please?
I need some essay at topic:family,your dream,environment,education and others.I have an essay ,please find the error in the essays and revise for their?Okie?

My future job

I allways want to be a designer.When i was small,i've dreamed about limelight,the fashon show and beautiful models who wear nice dresses or clothes-the suit was designed by me.I love drawwing or things relate to art.My father is a teacher but in the pass,he was a painter.He draw very well and i love his pictures.So that,I have the ability to draw very nice.I have a creative mind and i also enjoy the creative.I allways want to creat something of mind.And i know that something is the clothes.I love fashion and my favourite television is FASHON TV.It's a interesting chanel!!

Being a designer is not easy but i'll try my best.I hope i'll because i believe in my ability!