maggy311344
Apr 1, 2019
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Global resources are consumed in dramatically increased rate [4]
Thank you so much. However, I am still confused about how to rewrite. Another review from a Contributor = thread must be Urgent.
This is my introduction. Is it better??
It is true that global resources are consumed dramatically increasingly. While there are several reasons influencing this big issue, we will discuss with overpopulation and wasting resources, and I believe that we can do more things to cope with it.
Thank you so much. However, I am still confused about how to rewrite. Another review from a Contributor = thread must be Urgent.
This is my introduction. Is it better??
It is true that global resources are consumed dramatically increasingly. While there are several reasons influencing this big issue, we will discuss with overpopulation and wasting resources, and I believe that we can do more things to cope with it.