Scholarship / My curiosity about machines. Supporting statement for Australia Award scholarship 2020 [5]

Hello, Please help me to proof my essay for Australia Award Scholarship.

1. How did you choose your proposed course and institution?

Since my childhood, I have always been interested in machines especially their structure, functions and process. So I finished my degree with Mechanical Engineering for my curiosity about machine. After graduation, I joined tire production industry to seek experience and apply for my knowledge. While working in that factory, I learned not only that the machine parts which are related with each other but also organization processes. Then, I started interesting in supply chain management. After 5 years in that work, I transferred to the department of small and medium enterprise development where I have to be responsible for providing services for SMEs in my region. At that time, I realized myself to upgrade my skill and capacity to facilitate local SMEs more efficiently. In our country, SMEs play a main role for economic development but most of SMEs are running in a traditional way in their relevant business. They are lack of knowledge and fail accomplishment in linking with same industry to one other especially in supply chain management. To achieve better results, the supply chain management integrates the business process such as logistic, procurement, distribution and reducing in cost of production. This program will enable me to get better understanding on how to enhance better quality services, and practical supply chain management improvement which will help me in executing my assigned duties. Therefore, I wish to apply for this supply chain management course that I can provide value added services and promote local SMEs more efficiently. Furthermore, I choose to study in University of Wollongong and Victoria University that will suitable for greater degree. Moreover, both Universities are internationally recognized in Australia Universities and have good ranked and reputation among the world's university. In additions, I believe that the course structure given in these universities matched and fulfill my interest, desire knowledge and skills as well as SMEs in our country.

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