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May 9, 2020
Writing Feedback / University graduates in Canada - IELTS WRITING Task 1 Question and Answer [3]
The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line graph provided reveals the amount of institution graduates male and female in Canada between 1992 and 2007.
Overall, it can be seen that, despite some fluctuations, over the period as a whole the number of graduates rose in male and female
In 1992, the sum of female alumnus stood at just below 100000 graduates. Over the next 3 years, they rose steadily to reach around 105000 graduates. Afterward, women dropped moderately to reach approximately 10000 graduates 3 years later. During 8 years, the number of female graduates grew enormously to achieve just under 150000 graduates in the course of 2006.
Turning to the boy, at the beginning of the period, University in Canada had graduated males approximately 70000 graduates. Over one decade, they witnessed a fluctuation and in the following 4 years, the figure saw a huge climb at almost 95000 graduates at the end of the period.
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writing report about Canadian graduates
The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line graph provided reveals the amount of institution graduates male and female in Canada between 1992 and 2007.
Overall, it can be seen that, despite some fluctuations, over the period as a whole the number of graduates rose in male and female
In 1992, the sum of female alumnus stood at just below 100000 graduates. Over the next 3 years, they rose steadily to reach around 105000 graduates. Afterward, women dropped moderately to reach approximately 10000 graduates 3 years later. During 8 years, the number of female graduates grew enormously to achieve just under 150000 graduates in the course of 2006.
Turning to the boy, at the beginning of the period, University in Canada had graduated males approximately 70000 graduates. Over one decade, they witnessed a fluctuation and in the following 4 years, the figure saw a huge climb at almost 95000 graduates at the end of the period.
Please give me feedback and give band score!
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