loan1210
May 26, 2019
Undergraduate / University of Technology Sydney - Study plan for Australia visa [3]
My name is Thi Ngoc Loan Nguyen, I'm 18 years old and I graduated from Tien Giang High School For The Gifted.
I think Australia is a suitable place for me to study university because Australia is a developed country and well-known as the best country for the international students. The government of Australia cares about the living of international students, provides an array of convenient conditions and makes sure about their security when they are studying in there. Furthermore, the system of transportation and the climate in Australia are both terrific. Especially, the education of Australia has high quality.
I am going to attend University of Technology Sydney ( UTS Insearch ). UTS is located in central city with the modern facilities and equipment. Additionally, technology is the strong point of UTS and the Communication course is in accordance with my requirements. Before I study Diploma of Communication, I will take the two-months English course which begins on July 1st, 2019 so as to improve my academic English and get use to the environment of university . In the Communication course, I will learn about "soft skills" as creativity, interpersonal communication skills, the ability to the problem solve and to work well in collaboration.
After I complete the Bachelor of Communication, I will come back to Viet Nam in order to continue to pursue my dream. I want to be a lecturer in Viet Nam 's university, teach what I can learn from developed country to the younger generation and impulse the development of Communication in Viet Nam.
Please point out my mistakes in this essay and give me some your ideas . I'm very grateful .
Australia is perfect for the international students
My name is Thi Ngoc Loan Nguyen, I'm 18 years old and I graduated from Tien Giang High School For The Gifted.
I think Australia is a suitable place for me to study university because Australia is a developed country and well-known as the best country for the international students. The government of Australia cares about the living of international students, provides an array of convenient conditions and makes sure about their security when they are studying in there. Furthermore, the system of transportation and the climate in Australia are both terrific. Especially, the education of Australia has high quality.
I am going to attend University of Technology Sydney ( UTS Insearch ). UTS is located in central city with the modern facilities and equipment. Additionally, technology is the strong point of UTS and the Communication course is in accordance with my requirements. Before I study Diploma of Communication, I will take the two-months English course which begins on July 1st, 2019 so as to improve my academic English and get use to the environment of university . In the Communication course, I will learn about "soft skills" as creativity, interpersonal communication skills, the ability to the problem solve and to work well in collaboration.
After I complete the Bachelor of Communication, I will come back to Viet Nam in order to continue to pursue my dream. I want to be a lecturer in Viet Nam 's university, teach what I can learn from developed country to the younger generation and impulse the development of Communication in Viet Nam.
Please point out my mistakes in this essay and give me some your ideas . I'm very grateful .
